2021年中考话题写作讲义1：school life

真题再现： Write at least 60 words on the topic “Changes in my school”. Use the following points as a reference. What changes have taken place in your school? What do you think of these change? 初稿： Changes in my school When we talk about our school, we usually have a lot to say①, including the teachers, the students and so on. We all believe that the school is an important part in our life②. It teaches us knowledge and helps us grow up③. We love it so much④. However, in recent years, the environment there has been seriously polluted, and we feel worried⑤. We could see the clean playground in the past, but now it becomes a new one with rubbish everywhere⑥. As we know, the polluted environment is bad for⑦ our health. Therefore, we must take some actions before things get worse⑧. As students, we spend longer time at school⑨. So, love our school and protect the environment to make it a better place. 1. 单纯使用时间状语从句 2. 单纯使用宾语从句 3. 五大基本句型+并列句的使用 4. 五大基本句型 5. 五大基本句型 6. 五大基本句型 7. 短语使用过于简单 8. 五大基本句型+单纯使用时间状语从句 9. 五大基本句型 Changes in my school When talking about our school, we usually have a lot to say①, including the teachers, the students and so on. There is no denying that it plays an important role in our life②. We must admit it is school that makes us knowledgeable and helps us grow up③. We love it more than anything else④. However, in recent years, the environment there has been seriously polluted, which makes us worried⑤. The clean playground that we could see in the past has become a new one with rubbish everywhere⑥. As we know, the environment has a great influence on our health. Therefore, effective measures must be taken before things get worse⑦. As students, the time we spend in school is much longer than that at home⑧. So, love our school and protect the environment to make it a better one. ① 固定句型： When+doing…, sb … 译为：当……时，某人…… 考点链接：原句：What do you want to be when you grow up? 替换为：What do you want to be when growing up? ② 固定句式： There is no denying that… 译为：不可否认…… 考点链接：原句：I think the most important thing in a friendship is to respect each other. 替换为：There is no denying that the most important thing in a friendship is to respect each other. ③ 强调句 It is/was + 被强调部分 + who/that + 其他 译为：是…… 考点链接：原句：The Beatles have reminded the biggest selling group in the world with one billion CDs, tapes and records sold. 替换为：It is the Beatles that have reminded the biggest selling group in the world with one billion CDs, tapes and records sold. ④ 比较级表最高形式 We love it more than anything else. 译为：我们都爱它。 考点链接：原句：But I think shopping is the most important. 替换为：But I think shopping is more important than anything else. ⑤ 非限制性定语从句 句子, + which… 译为：……的 考点链接：原句：Dongfang International School was set up in 1954. As it is one of the best s ... ...