(
课件网) 衢州五校期中联考 应用文讲评 ——— 感谢信 1 提升写作高阶思维，有效交际4C原则 The thank-you letter 假定你是李华，是校学生会主席。上周日，你邀请了外教Mike来参加主题为“中西方文化交流”的英语角活动，请你给他写一封感谢信。要点包括： 1. 表达感谢： 2. 回顾Mike对活动的帮助； 3.表达祝愿。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 How to write the genuine appreciation letter 假定你是李华，是校学生会主席。上周日，你邀请了外教Mike来参加主题为“中西方文化交流”的英语角活动，请你给他写一封感谢信。要点包括： 1. 表达感谢：2. 回顾Mike对活动的帮助；3.表达祝愿。 Format Structure （3 paras） Contents (4 key points) Tone and language An epistolary form requiring the complete form of the letter (title, body, conclusion, and closing) ① Background information of the letter (Thanks for Mike's attending the English corner themed "Cultural Exchange between China and the West") ② Review Mike's help to the activity (Open-ended point) ③ Express wishes 1. Writing background information (Level 1 information); 2. Express gratitude; 3. Review Mike's help to the activity; 4. Express good wishes The content should be true, and the appraisal be appropriate. Speak in moderation and in narrative. Information hierarchy 信息层级性 Information Level-1 Level-2 Level-3 Thanks for Mike's attending the English corner themed "Cultural Exchange between China and the West" Express gratitude; Review Mike's help to the activity; Express good wishes Title, body, conclusion, and closing 第一层级信息直接影响交际的有效性 The first level of information directly affects the effectiveness of communication 4 “C” principles of practical writing the status of identification Character reasonable expansion of details Content make sentences logical Causality cover all the key points Completeness Character-the status of identification 1. Who are you You're Li Hua, president of Students' Union. 2. What topic may you bring up when organizing English Corner themed "Cultural Exchange between China and the West" overcome the awkward cultural differences when learning Enlish understand cultural differences in the mind is really important as the world globalizes lack knowledge and skills to manage cultural differences that exist between China and the West 假定你是李华，是校学生会主席。上周日，你邀请了外教Mike来参加主题为“中西方文化交流”的英语角活动，请你给他写一封感谢信。要点包括： 1. 表达感谢；2. 回顾Mike对活动的帮助；3.表达祝愿。 Content - reasonable expansion of details 3. How did Mike help you as a foreign teacher appreciate literary works intrduce diverse cultures 4. Why are you writing a letter to express your gratitude For Mike's passion and patience, professional attitude, profound knowledge and genuine concern. 假定你是李华，是校学生会主席。上周日，你邀请了外教Mike来参加主题为“中西方文化交流”的英语角活动，请你给他写一封感谢信。要点包括： 1. 表达感谢；2. 回顾Mike对活动的帮助；3.表达祝愿。 Causality- make sentences logical ... ...
