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课件网) Continuation Writing 读后续写 苹果树的故事 Long ago, there was a huge apple tree. A little boy love to come and play around it everyday. He climbed to the tree top, ate the apples, took a nap under the shadow…he loved the tree and the tree loved to play with him. Time went by…the little boy had grown up and he no longer played around the tree everyday. One day, the boy came back to the tree and he looked. "Come and play with me ," the tree asked the boy . "I am no longer a kid, I don't play around trees anymore." The boy replied, "I want toys. I need money to buy them." "Sorry, but I don't have money…but you can pick all my apples and sell them. So, you will have money." The boy was so excited. He grabbed all the apples on the tree and left happily. The boy never came back after he picked the apples. The tree was sad. One day, the boy returned and the tree was so excited. "Come and play with me," the tree said."I don't have time to play. I have to work for my family. We need a house for shelter. Can you help me " "Sorry, but I don't have a house, but you can chop off my branches to build your house."So the boy cut all the branches of the tree and left happily."The tree was glad to see him happy but the boy never came back since then. The tree was again lonely and sad. One hot summer day, the boy returned and the tree was delighted. "Come and play with me," the tree said."I am sad and getting old. I want to go sailing to relax myself. Can you give me a boat " What's the style of the passage Narration (记叙文) B. Exposition (说明文) C. Argumentation (议论文) who when where what how why Step 1：Thorough Reading Analysisi of the key factors content who when where what Why The boy _____ the apple tree when _____ and the tree _____ The boy: The apple tree: A little boy ( grown-up ); An apple tree (Once; After a long time) One hot summer day; The apple orhcard (苹果园) came to ask for help from offered for nothing in trouble children parents Part 1: Once... Day after day... One day, the boy got apples from the tree sold them for money and left. no time; grabbed, sad ——— excited, happy, never appeared pick my apples; sad purpose dialogue feelings Step 2：Logical Plotting the boy the tree the apples purpose dialogue feelings Part 2: After a long time, he came again and got money from the branches of treenthen left without coming back again. no time; chopped; left happily; no information pick my apples; excited ——— Lonely& sad the boy the tree the apples What kind of ending would you prefer for this story So the tree told the boy to use the trunk to build his boat. ......... “I don't have teeth to bite,” the boy replied. boy——— relaxed; not return tree ——— lonely; sad Tip1: 关注原文逻辑 Tip2：思考6个句子 (2个给定句和4个关键句) So the tree told the boy to use the trunk to build his boat.（句1）（句2）..................（句3） “I don't have teeth to bite,” the boy replied. （ ... ...
