人教新目标七上英语优生读写单元强化训练Unit8（附技巧点拨+答案详解）以读促写

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 如何写好关于“谈论日期及活动”的文章 　　本单元话题为“谈论日期”,请再次阅读第85页主题为“送给老师的生日礼物”的阅读理解,完成以下任务,从中找出关于“谈论日期及活动”类书面表达的写作规律。 1.What presents do the students send to the teacher (学生们送给老师什么礼物 ) 2.List the activities at the birthday party.(列出生日聚会上的活动。 ) 1.Choose some wonderful expressions and sentences from the passage.(从文中选择一些精彩的词句。) (1)Wonderful expressions: (2)Wonderful sentences: 2.Write your own expressions and sentences about dates.(写出你自己关于日期的词句。) (1)Your expressions: (2)Your sentences: Finish rewriting the article by filling in the blanks according to the Chinese. (根据汉语提示填空,完成文章的改写。) 1.　　　　　　　　(今天是11月18日). It’s Miss Li’s 30th birthday. She is a kind teacher in our school and 2.　　　　　　　　(我们非常喜欢她). We send presents to her. 3.　　　　　　　　(寒冷的冬天就要来了), so I buy a shawl for her. 4.　　　　　　　　(我的一些同班同学给她买了花) because she likes flowers. 5.　　　　　　　　(晚上我们给她举办了一个生日聚会). We sing a birthday song and dance for her. She also plays games with us. 6.　　　　　　　　(我们很高兴)! Write the following article using the guidance you’ve just learned.(运用以上所学知识,进行练笔。) 　　假如你是李红,请根据下面的提示向大家介绍一下你自己、你的家人及学校的活动。 提示: 1.How old are you 2.When is your birthday 3.How old are your parents 4.When are your parents’ birthdays 5.What activities do you have at school this term 要求:1.短文应包括提示中所有要点,可适当发挥; 2.词数:60词左右。 分数:　　　　　 书写:★★★★★ 结构:★★★★★ 内容:★★★★★ Advice from your teacher: 书写区域Good writing makes your article better. 修订区域 技巧点拨与答案详析 【审】 1.The writer sends a shawl and some students send flowers to her. 2.They sing a birthday song, dance and play games. 【润】 1.Today is November 18th 2.we love her very much 3.The cold winter is coming 4.Some of my classmates buy flowers for her 5.We have a birthday party for her at night 6.We’re very happy 【练】 One possible version: 　　Hello!I’m Li Hong. I’m 13. My birthday is on January 6th. (介绍自己的姓名、年龄、生日,日期用法准确,4分)My mother is 40 and my father is 41. My mother’s birthday is on May 5th and my father’s birthday is on June 25th.(介绍父母的年龄和生日,be动词及名词所有格使用准确,6分)We have a basketball game and an art festival at school this term. The basketball game is on October 10th.The art festival is on December 20th.(介绍篮球赛和艺术节两项活动,日期表达准确,5分) 21世纪教育网 www.21cnjy.com 精品试卷·第 2 页 （共 2 页） 21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com) ... ...