(
课件网) Continuation Writing Procedures I II Writing: plots & details Checking: consistence III Reading: elements & plots & feelings I-1 Reading： elements who setting (when) what why theme We were waiting in line to buy tickets for the circus. My father and I The father and mother 8 children under the age of 12 The father couldn't buy the tickets He didn't have enough money Love and kindness Reading： plots 01 02 03 04 05 Waiting in line to buy tickets for the circus The other family's turn to buy tickets The ticket lady giving the price The father not having enough money for the tickets I-2 Reading： feelings Before price given After price given kids: father: mother: kids: mother: father: excited, expectant expectant, adoring proud frustrated sad, guilty I-3 II Writing： plots 两段首句定一框 由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。 二框二首正能量 第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。 Para. 1 Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground. Para. 2 That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets. 两段首句定一框 Para. 1 Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground. Para. 2 That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets. Para. 1: 我父亲将这20美元给了他们。 二框二首正能量 Para. 2 That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets. Para. 2: 我父亲向我解释他的行为，我的感悟。 II Writing： Details 提出问句，有助于构成剧情的发展。 借助有效对话，心理描写，动作描写，场景描写让续写内容生动形象化。 Para. 1 Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground. Para. 1: 我父亲将这20美元给了他们。 Who would see the bill the father the mother one of the kids What would he / she do seeing the bill asked who would be the owner How would my father responded seeing that bill drop from the father How would the father feel grateful Para. 1 Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground. Para. 1: 我父亲将这20美元给了他们。 How would my father catch their attention to the bill went straight to the father and told him How would he / she respond understood immediately How would he / she feel grateful Para. 2 That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets. Para. 2: 我父亲向我解释他的行为，我的感悟。 What would I ask What would my father say How would I feel proud of my father determined to help others 动作描写 The father murmured a thank you and took the money. 那个父亲接过钱。 The father slowly seized the money with grateful look on his face. The father slowly reached out for the money looking straight at my father. The father held the money tightly with shaking hands. 情感描写 那个父亲接过钱时的感受 The father didn't ... ...
