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课件网) Uuit 4 Reading for Writing Tsunami Hits Asia: Over 6500 Dead Lead in Where did you first know the tsunami What does a piece of news include Do you know Pre-reading Parts of News lead 导语 summary explanation/summary details and more information Tsunami Hits Asia: Over 6500 Dead 1st sentence in Para1 headline 标题 body 主体 the rest of the text Outline 框架 Read the headline（标题） 1. What happened 2. Where did it happen 3. How many people were dead Tsunami Hits Asia: Over 6500 Dead Read the lead（导语） 1. When did the tsunami happen 2. Why did it happen 3. Who were the victims The most powerful earthquake in the past 40 years caused a tsunami 【that crashed into coastlines across Asia 】yesterday, killing more than 6500 people in Indonesia, India, Thailand, Malaysia, and at least four other countries. a tsunami Asia yesterday(Sunday, Dec.26,2004) caused by the most powerful earthquake in the past 40 years more than 6500 people in Indonesia, India, Thailand, Malaysia, and at least four other countries what where who why when southeastern Asian countries 提取“五要素” Read the body（主体） Para 1&2 influence of the tsunami southeastern Asian countries 东南亚的国家 Relation between the lead and body Read the body Para 3 results & rescues 海啸的结果和救援 results 结果 The number of deaths and missing is expected to grow even higher. the rescue work foreign aid 1.dangerous conditions 2. damaged roads 留谁？ 删谁？ 只能有60字 化减 The most powerful earthquake in the past 40 years caused a tsunami 【that crashed into coastlines across Asia 】yesterday, killing more than 6500 people in Indonesia, India,Thailand,Malaysia, and at least four other countries. A tsunami killed more than 6,500 tourists, fishermen, and other locals in Southeast Asia. 留谁？ what when where results 删谁？ why process 过程 合并同类项 化简 四 改写 全文主旨句 化简 怎么化简？ 方法：减法+合并同类项+改写 如果文章首句不是主旨句 怎么找？ 找 what when where Thousands of people are missing and the number of deaths is expected to grow even higher over the next few days. Thousands of people are lost and the number of deaths is still increasing. 改写 要点 1 However, dangerous conditions and damaged roads will make it difficult to deliver food and supplies. However, the damage caused by the tsunami is making it difficult for rescue workers to help the survivors. 改写 概要写作的本质 本质 用自己简洁的话去除次要的,只留文章的核心（重点） 概要写作的形式 主旨句 若干拓展句 总结 概要写作的方法 “减法运算+合并同类项+改写” 写作要求 评分标准 概要步骤 第一步：读第一遍; 判断文章体裁 找全文主旨句 The night the earth didn't sleep 全文主旨 如果文章首句不是主旨句？ 怎么办？ 全文主旨 时间 when 地点 where 发生了什么 what 合并：when + where + what 找 第一段主旨句 when: on 28 July 1976 ｗhere: in Tangshan, Hebei what: a earthquake struck 合成主旨句： A serious earthquake struck Tangshan, China. 文章体裁 文章体裁 主题句的构成 拓展 说明文 说明的观 ... ...
