(
课件网) 译林版《英语》四年级下册 Unit4 Drawing in the park (Writing) Learning aims(学习目标): 能够围绕“In the park”主题写一篇50个单词左右的英语作文。 能够理解拓展词汇和句型，并适当运用。 能够掌握一定的写作技巧。 能够懂得敬畏大自然，爱护家园。 Spring comes ... Let’s go to the park! A: What can you see B: I can see a … In the park A: What can you see B: I can see a … on ... In the park A: What can you see B: I can see some … near ... In the park A: What can you see B: I can see two … beside ... In the park A: What can you see B: I can see some … under ... In the park 请你连起来说一说，介绍公园里的景物吧。 Look at the park. I can see a ... I can see a ... on ... I can see some ... near ... I can see two ... beside ... I can see some ... under ... Tip 1 巧用介词，准确描述 in, on, beside, near, under ... Let's talk Look at the park. I can see a river. I can see a boat on the river. I can see some hills near the river. I can see two trees beside the river. I can see some flowers under the trees. Tip: There is/are ... + 地点，表示“某地有什么” There is a river. There are some hills near the river. There are two trees beside the river. There are some flowers under the trees. Let's learn There is a boat on the river. Look at the park. I can see a river. There is a boat on the river. There are some hills near the river. I can see two trees beside the river. There are some flowers under the trees. Tip 2 变换句式，避免重复 I can see ... in/on ... There is/are ... in/on ... A: What can you do in the park B: I can ... climb the hill ... fly kites ride a bike go boating have a picnic play football draw pictures Let's say I can fly kites in the park. I can play football. I can draw pictures. I can fly kites in the park. It's great fun. I can play football with my friends. I can draw pictures too. I like drawing. It's easy. Let's learn Tip 3 丰富内容，生动表达 Look at the park. I can see a river. There is a boat on the river. There are some hills near the river. I can see two trees beside the river. There are some flowers under the trees. I can draw them. I can have a picnic in the park too. Look at the park. It's big and nice. I can see a river. There is a boat on the river. There are some hills near the river. I want to climb the hills. I can see two big trees beside the river. There are some flowers under the trees. They're very beautiful. I can draw them. It's easy. I can have a picnic with my friends in the park too. Tip 3 丰富内容，生动表达 Let's learn Look at the park. It's big and nice. I can see a river. There is a boat on the river. Near the river, there are some hills. I want to climb the hills. I can see two big trees beside the river. There are some flowers under the trees. They're very beautiful. I can draw them. It's easy. I can have a picnic with my friends in the park too. Beginning (整体印象) Body (能见、能做) Ending (表达感情) What a wonderful park! I like the park. Tip 4 有头有 ... ...
