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课件网) How to Write a Good Composition 1. A：The rat got drunk. B：Then he took a stick in his hand and started to attack a cat. 2. A: Tom is a boy. B: He is seven years old. C: He was watching TV in the living room when he heard a terrible noise. D: Then he rushed out immediately. E: At last he found it was just a daydream. 1. With a stick in his hand, the rat, who got drunk, started to attack a cat. 2. Hearing a terrible noise, Tom, a seven-year-old boy ,who was watching TV in the living room, rushed out immediately, only to find it was a daydream. 如何使书面表达 显出文采；展示个性；亮而出众 （一）Try to avoid mistakes A: “缺胳膊少腿”型： （1）But was 6 o’clock. （2）However, other students against the idea. （3）He seated on the grass. But it was 6 o’clock. However, other students are against the idea He seated himself on the grass. He was seated on the grass. 1. He returned back yesterday. 2. He dressed his clothes quickly. B：“画蛇添足”型： 1.He returned yesterday. 2. He dressed himself quickly. C. “张冠李戴”型： 1)Don’t worry. Your body will get well soon. 2)The time past quickly. 3)The price of my car is very expensive. 4)China has a more population than Japan. You passed high. larger D. “Chinglish.”型: I this morning eat breakfast. I'm very like play basketball. We should hard study. But I better like listen music. Live to old, study to old. I had breakfast this morning. I like playing basketball very much. We must work/ study hard. But I like listening to music better. It’s never too old to learn. E．“瞻前不顾后”型: Although he was very tired ，but he went on working in the office. Although he was very tired ，he went on working in the office. He was very tired ，but he went on working in the office. F．“生搬硬套” 型: There used to have an old church here. be （二）Try to use complex sentences The little boy knows so many things。 It surprises him。 1)、Use so--that 2)、强调句。 3)、Attr. Clause. 4)、N--Clause. (There are two possible ways .) →The little boy knows so many things that he feels surprised . →It is that the little boy knows so many things that surprises him。 →The little boy knows so many things , which surprises him。 →① What surprises him is that the boy knows so many things. → ② That the boy knows so many things surprises him. （三）Try to use different sentence structures or complicated structures Practice: 按括号中的要求改写下列各句。 1They sang and laughed as they went back home. (Use -- ing form) 2The teacher walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (Use PP.) 3 I passed the English exam because of your help. (Use prep.) 4If you study harder, you will keep up with your classmates. (Compound sentence) 5）(Inversion) A . I could hardly believe it. B .The door opened and a woman came in. She was Bob’s wife. C .Although she is a girl, she knows a lot about the world. →Singing and laughing, they went back home. →Followed by many ... ...
