外研版必修1 Module1 My First Day at Senior High单元主题写作点睛素材

Module1 单元主题写作点睛 建议信 写作任务1 假设你叫李华，你的美国朋友Johnson想和家人来中国定居，请你帮助他在A、B两座城市中做出选择。下图是这两座城市在就业、娱乐和环境方面的对比情况。图表左边的数字说明了人们对这两座城市的喜爱程度。请根据相关信息用英语给他写一封电子邮件，提出你的建议并说明理由。 注意：①词数120左右。 ②电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 谋篇布局 定题材 应用文 定人称 第一人称为主 定时态 以一般现在时为主 定要点及结构 全文可分为三部分进行写作。第一部分：文章开头，交代写作背景，表明作者意图。第二部分：主体部分，认真读取图示信息，对两座城市的情况进行对比分析，阐述理由。第三部分：文章结尾，表达希望 参考范文 Dear Johnson, After a careful study of the information about the two cities, I suggest you choose to live in City A. First of all, the reason why City A is more suitable to live in is that the environment in City A is better than that in City B. Besides, there are many places for entertainment, where you can enjoy yourself in your spare time. Last but not least, though the opportunities for the employment are not so good as in City B, I don't think it's a problem for you as you are an English teacher. I hope my suggestion will meet with your approval. Yours, Li Hua 写作任务2 假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报在创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写一封信，内容主要包括： ①说明你是该报的忠实读者； ②说明该报优点：兼顾国内外新闻，介绍名人成功故事； ③提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章。 注意：①词数100左右； ②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 谋篇布局 定体裁 应用文 定人称 以第一人称为主 定时态 以一般现在时为主 定要点及结构 全文可分为四部分进行写作。第一部分：文章开头，交代写作背景，对应第一个要点。第二部分：主体部分，针对第二个要点展开叙述，进行拓展。第三部分：提出建议，对应第三个要点。第四部分：文章结尾，表达祝愿和感谢。 参考范文 Dear Editor-in-Chief, Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!I'm a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy. There are many advantages of Global Mirror. Firstly, Global Mirror covers both national and international news. By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad. Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them. In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world. As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of the English language. Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us. Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular. Thank you for your time! Sincerely yours, Li Hua ... ...