(
课件网) Book one module 1 -- my school life writing Revision on adjectives and nouns enthusiastic exciting amazing interesting brilliant boring embarrassing previous disappointing spelling special hard-working favorite teachers look behaviour teenagers classroom screen games activities memory New school New life！ 本课内容： 上周，你在新疆的好朋友给你发了一封email，你现在要给他写一封回信，谈谈你在大连二十高中的新生活。 How can we compose an e-mail 文体特点： 电子邮件与传统书信相比格式较为随意，大多数篇幅短小精悍，语言简单明了。 开头部分通常写明写此邮件的目的，主题部分详细介绍要谈论的主要事件，结尾部分进行总结或者提出希望。 审题谋篇： 体裁 电子邮件 话题 my happy school life 时态 人称 结构 首段： 中段： 尾段： 第一人称 引出话题 介绍自己的新学校的快乐生活 自己的愿望 一般现在时 Content (内容) Does it cover different aspects（方面） Are they clear Language Are there any spelling mistakes（拼写错误） Do you use any linking words（连接词） Do you use correct tense（时态） Is there any advanced vocabulary（高级词汇）or good sentence patterns (句式) others Beautiful handwriting How to make your passage better 亮点句式： I was so pleased to hear from you. How is everything going / How time flies! I'm writing to say something about my happy school life. I'd like to tell you something about the coming sports meeting. I'm looking forward to your reply. 写作模板: Dear ___ __, I was so pleased to hear from you last week. Now I'd like to say something about _____ Now , it is good for me to introduce (我的新学校) to you . My new school is No. 20 Middle High school , which is located in the city of Dalian, covering the area of 78,000 m2 name of my new school location area In the past twenty days, I (用几个不同的句式来谈谈你的所见所闻) teachers my classmates As far as I am concerned, (说出自己的观点或者总结) I'm looking forward to your reply. yours, Homework Improve your passage after class and write it again as your homework.
