(
课件网) 高考英语读后续写语篇练习 1 ———2023广东省广州市天河区二模 帮助贫困家庭过圣诞节 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 续写原文 Gifts for the poor Mrs. Susan was mean and bad-tempered. There was no other way to describe her. Just the other day I heard her telling the headmaster that children took too much time in arts. She even said that most of us didn’t understand what we were doing. I left the office feeling very angry. My anger didn’t last, however. It was December and Christmas was approaching. Excitement filled me right up to the top of my head. I smiled and laughed, singing “Jingle Bells” as we rode home from school. After dinner, Mom and Dad called me into the family room. I knew what we were going to discuss. Every year for as long as I could remember, we had chosen a family who needed some extra help at Christmastime, and we had taken gifts and food to their house. It was one of our family’s favorite traditions. Dad said, “It’s time we decide which family to help this year. Do you have a suggestion ” Some years it had been really easy to decide, but this year I couldn’t think of anyone. Dad looked at Mom. “Maybe Mom has a suggestion. Sometimes she notices things the rest of us miss.” Mom smiled. “I do know of someone who needs our help. I think we should help Mrs. Susan.” 4 续写原文 I couldn’t believe what I was hearing! “But, Mom,” I protested, “she seems to have plenty of money and she dresses in nice clothes. Besides, she’s really bad-tempered. She doesn’t even like kids. She might even kick our gifts off her porch (门廊). I think we should choose someone else.” “I know Mrs. Susan has enough money,” Mom said. “I know she isn’t very pleasant to be around. But she was divorced before she moved here. She has three children who have their own children and never come to see her. She is very lonely and unhappy. You see, she never celebrates Christmas. April, you weren’t quite right when you said she wasn’t poor.” “You mean she’s poor in love ” I asked. “Yes. Sometimes it’s much more painful to be poor in love than it is to be poor in money ”I was quiet for minutes. Then Dad said, “Let’s take a vote.” Dad’ and Mom’s hands went up. Looking at them, I unwillingly raised mine. 5 段首句 Para 1：Mom said besides buying her a gift, we should make something by hand. Para 2: With the box in hand, I could feel my heart pounding when ringing Susan’s doorbell. 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 8 续写原文分析 9 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了每年圣诞节，作者和家人会选择帮扶一个贫困家庭 ... ...
