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课件网) 高考英语读后续写语篇练习———2023·临沂一模 假肢海豚为残疾女孩带来希望题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文Palm trees seemed to speed by the car window. Eight-year-old Katrina began to get nervous, the way she always did in new surroundings. She felt a thin shine of sweat above her lip in spite of the car’s cool air. “The aquarium won’t be crowded, I bet, and people are gonna notice me. I hate wearing this prosthesis leg (假肢).” She felt tears pinprick behind her eyes. “Not being normal is the worst.”Entering the Clearwater Marine Aquarium, around a comer of a tank, she noticed an animal that looked unusual. “Is that a dolphin with stump (假肢) instead of a tail ” she asked an aquarium staff. He nodded. “Yes, that’s Winter. She’s a very special dolphin.” “What happened to her ” “This girl dolphin was found off the coast of Florida, caught in a crab trap. The ropes from the trap cut off the blood circulation to her tail. So she lost her tail,” Katrina caught her breath. “She’s just like me. She’s just like me.” “But she struggled to survive. Now she wears a prosthetic tail part of the day to help her swim like a dolphin’s supposed to swim.” the staff continued, “Every day, Winter shows us anything is possible if we believe.”续写原文Katrina felt her heartstring was touched. She waved at Winter. Looking at Katrina, Winter raised her flipper (鳍), came to her and lifted her head. “She’s swimming right into my arms,” Katrina said tearfully. They made eye contact. She seemed to be speaking to Katrina: We’re the same.Back home, all Katrina talked about was Winter. For two weeks, she cried and begged her mother to take her back to Clearwater.Unfortunately, another blow hit Katrina. She fell on the hardwood floor at home and broke her other leg. Katrina was in constant leg nerve pain. After a through examination, the doctor explained bad news that she would need another surgery on her leg. Years of a living hell came back to her.She started fearing surgery again and refused to take any.段首句Para 1：Katrina’s mom decided to take her back to Clearwater. Para 2: Finally came the day when Katrina was in the hospital again. Part 2题目分析点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写原文分析文章以故事情节发展为线索展开，讲述了一只腿装了假肢的女孩Katrina因为害怕别人异样的目光而容易感到紧张和自卑。有一次去了Clearwater海洋水族馆，发现了一只尾巴也是假肢的海豚。工作人员告诉她，这只海豚叫Winter，它被捕蟹器捕获，陷阱上的绳子切断了它尾巴的血液循环，所以她失去了尾巴。但是她仍然努力地像其他有尾巴的海豚一样游泳。Winter每天努力向人们证明“只要相信 ... ...
