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课件网) 高考英语读后续写语篇练习 一场关于争夺冠军的比赛带来的友谊 1 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 续写原文 Brodie and his father lived in a caravan (宿营拖车) ever since his mother died and they lost their house. Now they worked for Miss Martha in the garden. Brodie’s father had been a famous violin player. Brodie loved to watch how his father made the bow dance and glide (滑动) across the strings. When he turned 12, his father taught him how to play the instrument properly. Brodie was a fast learner and soon he could play the violin almost as well as his dad. One day, Miss Samson, Brodie’s teacher, asked if anyone could play the violin. A talent scout (星探) was coming to school. He was looking for someone to play in the musical Mr Spy. Hollie Larson’s hand went up fast. “I can play the violin,” she said. “I play in competitions.” Brodie kept quiet, but his friend Cam said, “Brodie has a violin and he can play it too.” Brodie slid down in his seat. There was no way he would be good enough to play for an audience. He wasn’t going to make a fool of himself. Hollie Larson was good at everything. 4 续写原文 “Bring your instruments tomorrow for a trial run,” the teacher said. “And oh, if you are selected, the pay is good!” Brodie’s father let him take the violin. “But do take good care of it, Brodie,” he said. Hollie Larson offered to play first. She was good, really good. Brodie suddenly felt embarrassed. There was no way he could play after her. But Miss Samson’s voice was demanding. “Brodie,” she said. “Your turn!” Brodie felt his face get hot as he pulled out the violin. But the minute the bow touched the strings, Brodie was transported to a different world. He was back in Martha’s garden listening to his father. The room, was silent as Brodie walked back to his seat. And then came the applause, everyone clapping, except Hollie Larson. Since the talent scout would come the next morning, Brodie decided to put the violin case on a high shelf in the classroom that night. It was the safest place, he thought. But, he was wrong! 5 段首句 Para 1：The next morning when he arrived, he found the case had fallen. Para 2: Suddenly, Hollie Larson walked toward him, holding out her violin———Use mine,” she said. 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 续写原文分析 8 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Brodie和父亲过着贫穷的生活，但在父亲的影响下，他成为一名优秀的小提琴手。一天，一名星探要选拔一名会拉小提琴的学生，Hollie Larson和Brodie都会拉小提琴，所以他们必须争夺在音乐剧《间谍先生》中演奏的机会，Brodie在前一天演奏得很成功，他专门把小提琴放在高高的架子上，期待着第二天的选拔。但就在第二天，意外发生了。 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读 ... ...
