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课件网) 高考英语读后续写语篇练习 护林员在守护森林中遇到的危险 1 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 续写原文 To mark their hard work and contribution to wildlife protection in the reserve, last year, Shi’s 20-member team was recognized with a special award at an online award ceremony for the IUCN World Commission on Protected Areas’ International Ranger Awards. Kathy MacKinnon, head of the commission, speaks highly of their work, saying that they are “critical to our global conservation efforts, helping to stem biodiversity loss and protect the important ecosystems that serve as natural solutions to climate change and other global challenges". Shi realizes that through protecting endangered animals, like giant pandas and snow leopards, the rich biodiversity of the environment can also be maintained, which is a win-win situation. After graduation from Sichuan Forestry School(now Sichuan Agricultural University) in 1992, Shi became a forest guardian at the Wolong National Nature Reserve. Established in 1963, Wolong is the country’s earliest panda reserve. It experienced serious human-animal conflict, such as illegal logging and hunting before the 1990s. In 1978, an observation tent, claimed to be the country’s first field camp to study wild giant pandas, was built on a steep forested slope in the reserve. 4 续写原文 In the early 1980s, the government cooperated with the World Wide Fund for Nature to establish the China Conservation and Research Center for the Giant Panda to save the endangered animal. At the very beginning, it was really difficult for rangers. With no proper outdoor equipment, like protective jackets or sleeping bags, every time, going around the area could be a life-threatening adventure. Plastic woven bags were commonly used for warmth and as makeshift tents for emergency cases. For Shi, the real challenges are natural disasters, which cannot be predicted. 5 段首句 Para 1：He has a vivid memory of a snowslide in June 2017 during a routine inspection. “We were about to climb over a 400-meter-long mountain pass. Para 2：There is a lot of hard work involved in protecting wildlife, but there are also some surprises from the job. 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 续写原文分析 8 本文是以倒叙的形式展开，首先介绍了Shi与他的团队在世界自然保护联盟世界保护区委员会国际护林员的在线颁奖典礼上获得了特别奖，然后开始叙述Shi从大学毕业以来，成为卧龙国家级自然保护区的森林守护者，介绍护林员的生活艰难，没有合适的户外设备，而更大的挑战是无法预测的自然灾难。 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 续写思路分析 Para 1：He has a vivid memory of a snowslide in June 2017 during a routine inspection. “We were about to climb over a 400-meter-long mountain pass. 由第一段 ... ...
