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课件网) ———美丽心灵（上） 读后续写之话题写作 Part1 素材积累 （一）短语积累———与音乐相关的短语 1.traditional music 传统音乐 2.classical music 古典音乐 3.dancing music 舞曲 4.folk music 民间音乐 5.jazz 爵士乐 6.blues 布鲁斯音乐，蓝调 7.campus songs 校园歌曲 8.national music 民族音乐 9.folk songs 民歌 10.art ballad 艺术民谣 1.Music is a good medicine for mental illness. 音乐是医治思想疾病的良药。 2.Poetry is music embedded in words, while music is poetry in rhyme. 诗是寄寓于文字中的音乐，而音乐则是声韵中的诗。 3.He who understands music can be free from all worldly troubles. 领悟音乐的人，能从一切世俗的烦恼中超脱出来。 4.When you are happy, you listen to music. When you are sad, you begin to understand the lyrics. 快乐的时候，你听的是音乐。难过的时候，你开始懂得了歌词。 5.Enjoy every moment back to zero! Thank you for music in your life. 享受每次回到零的瞬间！感谢生命中有音乐。 （二）美句赏析———与音乐相关的句子 Part2 技法提炼 （一）拟人修辞———赏析 1. 含义： Personification(人格化；拟人化）———The attribution（属性） of a personal nature or human characteristics to something non-human, or the representation of an abstract quality in human form. 与汉语拟人完全相同，就是赋予物以人的语言属性。这种拟人化的修辞手法读起来使人感到特别形象生动，富有情趣。 2. 运用： 技巧1：把自然现象当作人来描写 (景物描写) 1.The wind stood up and gave a shout. 大风凛冽,发出怒吼。 2.The breeze gently kissed her cheeks. 微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸庞。 3.The feathery snowflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture. 鹅毛般的雪花在空中飞舞，像一幅美丽的图画。 4.The mist swallowed him up. 薄雾把他包围起来。 5.The icy wind started howling,stinging my face. 寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。 技巧2：把含蓄抽象的概念当作人来描写（情感描写） 1.Fear seized/swallowed him. 恐惧把他吞噬了。 2.Anger choked my words. 我气得说不出话来。 3.A good idea suddenly struck me. 我突然想到一个好主意。 4.Smile took hold of him. 他笑容满面。 5.Anxiety torn him into pieces. 她焦虑不安，十分崩溃。 技巧3：把动物当作人来描写 (景物描写) 1.In the dead of night, the crickets played on the terrace of the house. 寂静的夜，蟋蟀旁若无人地在房子的阳台上玩耍。 2.Birds on the tree are singing a beautiful song. 树上的小鸟唱着美妙的歌曲。 3.The frogs are giving a concert—mixed chorus. 青蛙在举办音乐会一一混声大合唱。 4.Fireflies patrol the grass with small lanterns. 萤火虫提着小灯笼在草丛中巡逻。 3. 翻译练习： 1.夏天的微风轻轻地抚摸着我的脸。 . 2.细雨轻轻地亲吻着我的脸颊。 . 3.我能听到到处都是鸟儿在歌唱。 . 4.这个教堂目睹了这座城市在过去20年里的变化。 . The summer breeze touched my face gently The drizzle kissed me on my cheek gently I could hear birds singing everywhere The church has witnessed the city's changes in the past 20 years Part3 典例分析 1.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Early in the morning I went to the ocean beach to play my guitar. The usually crowded beach was deserted except for two pe ... ...
