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课件网) 高考英语读后续写语篇练习改变生态，荒地变森林题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文I met the Man of the Trees in summer ten years ago, when I was visiting Uncle Jita.Those were difficult times. People were cutting down our forest, and there was often flooding. Sometimes our water supply was dirty. When our pump(水泵)did have clean water, we had to wait in line for ages. When the pump wasn’t working, we had to walk five kilometres to the closest stream.But I was happy. I was going to see my favorite uncle. When the day finally arrived, Dad drove me to Uncle Jita’s house and left. Once he saw me, Uncle Jita announced, “Tomorrow we’re going to explore a magical place. Here is my camera, Amy. You can take photos of what you see.”The following day, we woke up and left early on a boat. The trip was exciting. But when we got off, there was ... nothing in front of us. “I don’t want to take pictures of this,” I complained.Uncle laughed,“Start walking, Amy. I promise you’ll be surprised.” After some time, I could see the outline of a forest in the distance. A little closer, there was a man waving to us.续写原文“That’s Kabir. The forest you see is his. He planted every single tree.” As we walked towards Kabir, Uncle explained that thirty years ago, the whole area was a wasteland. But one day Kabir decided to change all that and started planting trees. Thanks to him, part of the wasteland is now a paradise(天堂).Uncle introduced me to Kabir, who had gray hair and a determined face. “Jita told me you like animals. Are you ready to see some ” he asked. “Of course!” I replied. We continued walking and soon were under the trees. I turned my head and was amazed at the difference between the two places. All because of the efforts of one man.Like Uncle said, Kabir’s forest was magical. We saw deer, rhinos, and even tigers. During lunchtime, Kabir explained how, by planting trees, it was possible to stop the land from eroding(侵蚀).段首句Para 1：Hearing this, I turned to my uncle, “I think we can plant trees too ”Para 2：In the years that followed, people in our village worked hard to carry out our plan.Part 2题目分析续写原文分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了十年前，吉塔叔叔带作者去探索一个神奇的地方。那里30年前一片荒地，卡比尔决定改变这一切，开始植树，最终变成了森林，并且带来生态环境改变的故事。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写思路分析Para 1：Hearing this, I turned to my uncle, “I think we can plant trees too ”由第一段首句内容“听了这话，我转向叔叔说：“我想我们也可以种树。””可知，第一段可描写作者通过宣传森林让更多人参与种树。续写思路分析Para 2：In the years that followed, people in our village worked hard to carry out our plan.由第二段首句内容“在接下来的几年里，我们 ... ...
