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课件网) 高考英语读后续写语篇练习好心人为经济困难的家庭送圣诞礼物题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文A few days before Christmas, while enjoying coffees, my girlfriend and I noticed a woman trying to get her bank card to work.“Do you know her ” I asked my friend.“I do. Give me a minute. I’m going to go and see if I can help,” she replied, standing up to walk over to her.A few minutes later, my friend returned to the table with the woman. The woman looked upset. Her eyes were swollen, as if she’d been crying all night. She looked pale, tired, and messy. After I was introduced, my friend asked her if she was okay. She admitted she wasn’t and burst into tears.I could sense she was a little embarrassed by her emotional response. Wanting to put her at ease, I quickly told her not to worry. I shared that I was a new mom with many troubles and I’d already cried fourteen times that day. She laughed but soon her tears were flowing again.续写原文For the next forty-five minutes, my friend and I both sat and patiently listened to her. She lost her husband before Christmas and their bank accounts were now left nothing. As a stay-at-home mom of two, in one split second, her entire life had come crashing down around her.We tried our best to cheer her up. My friend even tried to give her some cash, which she refused. When she finally got up to leave, she wiped her tears, thanked us both for listening, and walked out.As I drove home, I couldn’t stop thinking about how depressed she looked when she left the cafe. No one deserves to feel that sad, I thought, especially right before Christmas. There must be something I can do to help. I racked my brain (绞尽脑汁) for an answer.段首句Para 1：Gladly, a solution came. Para 2：The kids were overjoyed when hearing that Santa (圣诞老人) sent them gifts.Part 2题目分析续写原文分析本篇书面表达是读后续写，文章讲述了作者和女友为一个困难家庭送圣诞礼物的故事。故事按照时间顺序展开，圣诞节前几天，作者和女友在喝咖啡时遇到一位刚失去丈夫、身无分文的全职妈妈，为了让她振作起来，在不伤害她自尊的前提下，作者和女友为她和家人买了些礼物。圣诞前夕，作者和女友把礼物送给妈妈和孩子们，看到他们脸上洋溢着的喜悦，作者感觉到自己带来了真正的改变，希望这家人的生活重回正轨。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写思路分析Para 1：Gladly, a solution came.由第一段首句内容“令人高兴的是，解决办法来了”以及第二段首句内容“孩子们听说圣诞老人给他们送了礼物，欣喜若狂。”可知第一段可描写想到了解决方法，为这位妈妈和她的孩子们买了些圣诞礼物，并在圣诞节之前把礼物送给他们。续写思路分析Para 2：The kids were overjoyed when hearing that Santa (圣诞老人) sent them gifts.由第二段首句内容“孩子们听说圣诞老人给他们送了礼物，欣喜若狂”可知，第二段可描写这位妈妈一开始拒绝，但在“我 ... ...
