(
课件网) 高考英语读后续写语篇练习 上班途中，偶遇火车出现问题 1 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 续写原文 One day I got stuck in the Tube on my way to work. The Tube—that’s what most people call it—is London’s underground railway system. It was about nine o'clock in the morning, the middle of the rush-hour. Nobody had expected something unusual would happen later and everyone was doing their usual: a pretty girl gave her boyfriend sweet kisses one after another. Sitting next to me, a young woman with a suitcase and a baby took a scarf out of her suitcase and made her baby a nest, so that it could lie more comfortably. In fact, the train had just left Green Park Station when, instead of speeding up, it started to slow down and then came to a stand-still. Ten minutes passed, though it seemed like half a day. the train didn’t move. Had the railwaymen forgotten all about our existence Had there been a crash on the line in front How serious was the breakdown We had no means of knowing. However, to anxious people who are stuck in the Tube, I suppose it doesn’t really matter what it is that has broken down. What they care is when they can get out of the trouble. 4 续写原文 Twenty minutes passed. All hope of getting to work on time had long since gone. Had the train really broken down Several people thought so, but they were wrong. A railwayman at last came down the length of the train to tell us that the power supply had failed, and that we were not to worry as they were working to put it right. We could not leave the train, as it had stopped in the tunnel (隧道), not at a station. There was nothing else to do. The weak signal disabled cellphones. Besides, the train was getting hot and stuffy (闷). I even began to wonder if we were going to stay there for the rest of the day. 5 段首句 Para 1：The hopeless waiting in the darkness drove us crazy. Para 2：As a commuter (上班族) who traveled to work on the train every day, I thought it my duty to do something. 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 续写原文分析 8 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一天上班途中，火车突然停了下来，车上的人们纷纷猜测发生了什么，二十分钟后，人们终于弄清楚，是火车电源失灵了，正在检修中，因为在隧道里，作者和其他乘客只能呆在又热又闷的火车里，怀疑自己是否会在那里呆一整天。 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 续写思路分析 Para 1：The hopeless waiting in the darkness drove us crazy. 由第一段首句内容“黑暗中绝望的等待把我们逼疯了。”可知，第一段可描写作者他们在闷热的火车里很难受，新鲜空气进不来，乘客开始抱怨、焦躁起来。 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：As a commuter (上班族) who traveled to work on the train every day, I thought it my duty to do something. 由第二段首句内容“作为一个每天坐火车上班的通勤者，我认为做点什么是我的责任。”可 ... ...
