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课件网) 高考英语读后续写语篇练习农民驾车遭遇危险，好心村民出手相助帮助收割庄稼题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文Scott Legried was a 50-year -old farmer in Frost, Minnesota. One October morning, he was driving his truck along the country road when a dog popped up out of nowhere. It was too late to hit the brake. Scott had no choice but to turn the wheel sharply to the right to avoid running over the dog.The dog had a lucky narrow escape, but Scott’s car crashed into the roadside cornfield. He got knocked out and when he came to, he found he was unable to move or even reach for his cellphone lying not far away. Scott was desperate for help.Fortunately, a motorist driving through the area found Scott and called 911. Scott was rushed to hospital. Without delay, the doctors gave Scott a thorough examination and found that he suffered multiple serious injuries and needed to be operated on immediately. After a 5-hour surgery, Scott was wheeled to his ward, where the doctors told Scott’s wife Susan that it would take several months for Scott to recover before he could do farm work again.续写原文It was really bad news. This was the busiest time of year for the farmers of the region. What the doctors said meant Scott would not be able to bring in their October harvest of soybeans and com in time, which would probably be ruined in the fields. The crops were their hard work of so many days! They meant the world to the family. Besides, wheat should be sown after the soybeans and com were harvested. They couldn’t afford to miss the farm time, but they could do nothing at all since Susan also had to stay in the hospital to accompany and take care of Scot. Feeling extremely anxious and helpless, the couple could hardly fall asleep on the first night in the hospital.The bad news that Scott had a serious accident spread quickly. The whole community were deeply concerned about him. Frank, director of the community, and some other farmers came to the hospital to see Scott the next day.段首句Para 1：Frank comforted the couple and promised to help them out.Para 2：Two months later, Scott recovered and returned home.Part 2题目分析续写原文分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了50岁农民斯科特驾驶卡车沿着乡村公路行驶，突然不知从哪里窜出一条狗。斯科特为了避免碾过狗，只能将方向盘向右急转弯，导致斯科特的车撞到了路边的玉米地里。身受重伤的斯科特需要立即进行手术，而且需要几个月才能康复。这是该地区农民一年中最忙碌的时候。后来社区主任弗兰克和其他一些农民帮助斯科特收获庄稼。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写思路分析Para 1：Frank comforted the couple and promised to help them out.由第一段首句内容“弗兰克安慰了这对夫妇，并答应帮助他们。”可知，第一段可描写弗兰克和村民帮助斯科特收割庄稼。续写思路分析Para 2：Two months ... ...
