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课件网) 高考英语读后续写语篇练习在陌生人的帮助下找回迷路的母亲题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文Twenty years ago, my mother, who was in her early eighties at that time, arrived for her regular two-week visit at my home in Chertsey. She lived with my elder brother in Derek most of the time and for ten years had stuck to her habit of going for an hour-long morning walk to keep fit. In Derek, she would walk around a park that is quite close to my brother’s house. Naturally, she was keen to continue her morning walk while with us in Chertsey.Our preferred park was a 2 km walk from my house and it had a l km walking track. I could not drive her there every day as I had to leave for the office at the same time she wanted to set out. Since there were hardly any footpaths in Chertsey, my mother said she was delighted to walk on the road as she was certain there wouldn’t be much traffic in the morning.续写原文I was less confident so I suggested it would be safer if she changed her walk time to the evening. That way I could take her to the park after work. However, my mother — a determined person — said that she could not change her routine for just a few days and insisted that she would be leaving the house every day at 7 am and returning by 8 am. She started doing this and stuck firmly to her schedule. So one day when she had not returned by 8:30 am, my wife, Qaisa, phoned me in a panic. Worried, I immediately drove home, taking the same route that my mother would have taken for her walk.Not spotting her anywhere, I went to the police station to report my mother’s disappearance. The station house officer advised me to wait until midnight before filling the report. Since it was only 10 am, I drove back to the park, in the hope of discovering some trace, but in vain. Totally at a loss for what to do next, I returned home and waited impatiently, walking back and forth in the house.段首句Para 1：At 11:10 am the doorbell rang and my mother stood outside the door smiling, accompanied by a young woman.Para 2：After knowing what had happened, I showed my appreciation of her kindness.Part 2题目分析点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了许多年前，作者80岁的母亲到作者家中小住，母亲每天早晨都会去公园散步一小时。作者因工作需要无法接送母亲去公园，原想让母亲改为每天傍晚外出散步，但作者的母亲执意在早晨散步，并说她早上7点出门，8点回家。然而有一天，作者的母亲到8点30分还未返回，作者的妻子惊慌地给作者打电话说明情况，作者立即开始寻找，但是无果，只得求助于警方。续写思路分析Para 1：At 11:10 am the doorbell rang and my mother stood outside the door smiling, accompanied by a young woman.由第一段首句内容“上午11点10分，门铃响了，母亲微笑着站在门外，身边是一位年轻女子。”可知 ... ...
