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课件网) 高考英语读后续写语篇练习女孩的父亲因为新冠病毒去世，暖心邻居帮助女孩度过难关题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文A Community Puts on a Dazzling Display of SupportIn Sara’s family, putting up Christmas lights was always a big day of celebration. Every year, just after Thanksgiving Day, her dad Anthony, 70, would visit local stores to check out new decorations and then excitedly string lights and hang decorations in and out of the house. The dazzling (绚烂的) display made him a hit in the community.On 2020 Christmas Eve, as usual, the whole house twinkled with lights, and gifts were piled under the tree. While everyone was looking forward to enjoying another Christmas together as a family, Sara, got a call: the whole family had tested positive for COVID-19. Their Christmas celebration had to be canceled.续写原文At first, everyone’s symptoms (症状) seemed manageable. But right after the new year, Anthony started having trouble breathing and unfortunately passed away two weeks later, though the rest had recovered from COVID-19. The following week of planning the funeral was the worst for Sara and her husband, Frank. Sorrow left them doubled over in pain. The saddest of all was that no neighbours attended her father’s funeral. Only the twinkling Christmas lights at night brought them a little bit joy. The lights were one of the last moments they had of their beloved father, so they kept them up.One morning in February, Sara received an envelope. “Take your Christmas lights down! It’s Valentine’s Day!!!” the unsigned letter read. Sara looked at the paper in shock. Then she got angry. She could have bottled up that anger, but she decided to write about it instead. She logged on to a local community Facebook group and shared the letter. She ended the post with this: “We all had a tough year. Be kind to people because you never know what they are going through.”段首句Para 1：Half an hour later, Frank rushed into the room excitedly, with his phone in the hand.Para 2：When night fell, Sara and Frank were surprised by what they saw outside.Part 2题目分析点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了莎拉的父亲因为新冠病毒而不幸去世，周围邻居通过他们的友爱的行为，表达了对他们家庭支持的故事。续写思路分析Para 1：Half an hour later, Frank rushed into the room excitedly, with his phone in the hand.由第一段首句内容“半小时后，弗兰克兴奋地冲进房间，手里拿着手机。”可知，第一段可描写莎拉发的帖子在网上被很多人点赞和评论，以及他们夫妇二人内心的心理变化的过程。续写思路分析Para 2：When night fell, Sara and Frank were surprised by what they saw outside.由第二段首句内容“夜幕降临时，莎拉和弗兰克被外面的景象惊呆了。”可知，第二段可描写周围的邻居都把圣诞彩灯挂起来了以 ... ...
