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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 专题09 名校话题作文范文10篇（详解版） 学校:_____姓名：_____班级：_____考号：_____ 牛津上海版期中好题精刷系列资料，助力期中冲刺！ 向满分说YES！ 一、话题作文 1．（2021秋·上海徐汇·九年级上海市徐汇中学校考期中）Idols can serve as important role models in our lives, so it’s very important to choose the right ones. We should celebrate people who teach us important values that can help guide us on the road ahead. Write at least 60 words on the topic “The importance of choosing the right idol”（偶像是我们生活中重要的榜样, 所以选择一个正确的偶像相当重要。我们应该称赞那些能教会我们正确价值观, 引领我们前行的人。请你结合自身或他人的经历谈谈选择正确偶像的重要性。以“选择正确偶像的重要性”为题, 写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文）。 （ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息, 否则不予评分。标点符号不占格） 【答案】例文 The importance of choosing the right idol Idol is a kind of spirit for us, is a model and yardstick to learn. The spirit of our idols influences us. When I was young, my favorite idol was Lei Feng. His pictures were plastered all over the walls of my room. Whenever I met difficulties in life and study, I would think of uncle Lei Feng’s deeds. When I entered middle school, my grades were not good at first. But inspired by Lei Feng’s spirit, I began to study hard. Finally, I was admitted to the ideal university with excellent results. So I feel it is very important to choose the right idol, it can make a great change in my life. I think everyone needs an idol to support their beliefs. Because the excellence of our idols drives us forward. 【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“The importance of choosing the right idol”为题，结合自身或他人的经历谈谈选择正确偶像的重要性。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。 2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时文章要紧扣题目的要点，围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。 2．（2021秋·上海虹口·九年级上海市民办新复兴初级中学校考期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “That day, I made a/an _____”. (以 “那天我……”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。) 生活中的每一次体验，每一段经历都为你的成长助力。那天，你或许交了一个朋友，或许许了一个愿望，或许做了一次新选择……，请分享一段你的经历，并说明这段经历是如何帮助你成长的。 _____ 【答案】例文： That day, I made a choice Life is full of choices, and there was an important and memorable choice in my life. When I graduated from my junior high school, I had to make a choice: to be a through-train student or to be a senior high school student. I was very aware of my strengths and weaknesses. I loved learning history and geography, and I was interested in politics. I didn’t want to leave away from my favorite subjects because I always enjoyed them while I was studying. So through painful thinking, I c ... ...