Module 1 Geniuses Unit 2 Great minds 单元话题满分范文必背（含解析）2024届九年级英语上册（牛津深圳版）

Unit 2 Great minds 单元话题满分范文必背 一、话题作文 1 ．英语报社正在征集“名人轶事”短文，请以“Someone in my heart”为题写一篇短文描述你所熟知的名 人故事。（词数： 80-100） 要求： 1. 明确主题，并在文中说明原因； 2. 围绕主题，进行叙述或论述观点； 3. 鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分； 4. 如果参考文中的内容，不可以直接引用其中的句子； 5. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。 ( 【答案】例文 Someone in my heart Everyone’s heart has a great person, maybe a person who saves the people, ma ybe someone who has got good spirit. As for me, the one in my heart is Qi an Xuesen, one of the most famous scientists in China. ) Qian Xuesen is not only smart but also hard-working. When he was young, he studied in some top universities. He worked so hard that he won lots of prizes and had many great inventions as well. Here are two reasons I admire him. First of all, he knew wherever he was, he was a Chinese. So he gave his whole life to our country. What’s more, he is the person who makes our country stronger and stronger. I’m sure every Chinese won’t forget him. I have learnt so much from him, and I will try my best to be a person like him. ( 【详解】 [ 总体分析 ] 。 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为报纸投稿； ) ( ② 时态：主要时态为 “ 一般现在时和一般过去时 ” ； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏 “ 信息提示 ” 中欣赏名人轶事的原因，适当添加细节，并突 出写作重点。 [ 写作步骤 ] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出最喜欢的名人； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从 “ 性格、取得成就 、喜欢原因 ” 等几个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语。表达 “ 想成为名人那样的人 ” 的愿望。 [ 亮点词汇 ] ① as for 至于 ② not only … but also … 不但 …… 而且 …… ③ as well 也 [ 高分句型 ] ① As for me , the one in my heart is Qian Xuesen , one of the most famous scientists in China . （ “ one of the + 形容 词最高级 + 可 数名词复数 ” ） ② He is the person who makes our country stro nger and stronger. （定语从句） ) 二、材料作文 2 ．一个有希望的民族不能没有英雄，一个有前途的国家不能没有先锋。每个人心中都有自己的英雄。 《ABC Kids》 报社正在举行“ 心中的英雄”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容提示： 1. What does a hero mean in your opinion 2. Who is a hero in your heart 3. What can you learn from him or her 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数 60~80；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Everyone has a hero in his or her heart. ( 【答案】例文： Everyone has a hero in his or her heart. I t hink a hero must be a good example for others. The hero in my heart is called Li Lanjuan. She is a doctor from Zhejiang. The reason I like her is that she, as well as her team, saved a lot of patients during the pandemic. She is not only brave in th e face of the virus but also very professional . After taking her advice , thousands of people were saved . Maybe I cannot be a doctor like her but I will try my best t o contribute to human society. 【详解】 [ 总体分析 ] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为 “ 一般现在时 ” 和 “ 一般过去时 ” ； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生 ... ...