人教版（2019）选择性必修 第三册Unit 4 Adversity and Courage Writing 写作专练同步练习（含解析）

课时把关练 Part IV Writing 妙笔生花———读后续写 读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。 　　One weekend in July，Jane and her husband，Tom，had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately，on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake，Jane was so angry that she said to Tom，“I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp，” and walked away. 　　With no path to follow，Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place，she turned around，hoping to see the lake. To her surprise，she saw nothing but the forest and，far beyond，a snow-capped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. 　�———�Tom!”she cried. “Help!”No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving，but the farther she walked，the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall，Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark，Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. 　　Jane rose at the break of day，hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling （滴落） somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy，she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now，Jane began to walk along the stream and hoped it would lead her to the lake. 　　As she picked her way carefully along the stream，Jane heard a helicopter. “Is that for me ” Unfortunately， the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later，another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse，thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them down if they came back again. But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. _____ _____ 　　It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _____ _____　　 步骤一：品读语篇———抓住要点很关键 　　前文概要 　　审语篇类型：记叙文 　　审时态：一般过去时 　　审前文大意以及要点 　　第一段：露营的路上夫妻吵架，简出走； 　　第二段：简迷路； 　　第三段：简自救，思念汤姆； 　　第四段：简寻找出路； 　　第五段：简听到直升机的声音。 步骤二：戴着镣铐跳舞———研读首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情节 　　①续写第一段所给首句：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. 　　上文提到简迷路，在野外待了一夜，第二天听到了直升机的声音，她试图吸引直升机的注意。根据第一段的首句提示可知，再没有直升机飞过来，而且夜幕再次降临。本段续写时，要注意描写简继续自救的过程。例如如何度过寒冷的夜晚、简当时的心理感受等。 　　②续写第二段所给首句：It was daybreak when Jane woke up. 　　本段应该描写简继续自救和最终获救的过程。续写时要注意前面提到的直升机以及她是如何引起直升机上人员的注意的。 步骤三：斟酌打磨———丰富续写词汇，生动描述情节 　　话题激活词汇 　　环境：forest，stream，rock，berry，vall ... ...