Unit 3 I’m more outgoing than my sister. Name Writing Analyze the text. Wang Lingling and Liu Lili are best friends. In some ways, they are similar. They are both tall and beautiful.Lingling is as outgoing as Lili. So both of them are popular at school. However, they are different in other ways. First, Lingling's hair is longer than Lili's. Then, Lili is funnier and smarter. She can always make Lingling laugh. She is much less hard-working. Lingling is more serious. And she can always get better grades. She always helps Lili in maths and English. At last, they have different hobbies. Lili likes doing sports. She is good at playing basketball.But Lingling thinks doing sports is boring and she likes reading better. Although they have some differences, they are still best friends. II.Analyse the writing topic. Writing Topic Who is your best friend What are your similarities and differences Write a passage about your best friend and you. 写作要求：1. 字迹清楚，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰；2. 词数70词左右。 Person： Tense： Text： Details： III. Make an outline Structure： IV. Finish the first draft V. Finish the second draftMarking ladders Unit 3 I’m more outgoing than my sister. For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment Structure and content I write the whole passage into paragraphs. (1 point) Para : I lead to the topic (1 point) Para_____:I introduce similarities and differences about appearance,hobbies,personalities between my friend and I. (3 points) Para.____:I show my conclusion. (1 point) My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point) Grammar and language I use comparative forms correctly. For example:.I am as outgoing as my friend. I am funnier and more outgoing than my friend. (3 points) My punctuation is correct. (1 point) There are spelling mistakes. (1 point) I have used some good sentences. (1 point) I have used some conjunction words. (1 point) I have checked my word count is around . (1 point) Total Score What can I do to improve my writing next time (
课件网) Unit3 Writing Pre-writing Appearance What information can we find in the chart Hobbies Personalities Pre-writing What are their similarities 1.Wang Lingling is as tall as Liu Lili. =They are both tall. 3.Wang Lingling is as outgoing as Liu Lili. =Both of them are tall. 2.Wang Lingling is as popular as Liu Lili. =They are both popular. =Both Wang Lingling and Liu Lili are popular. =They are both outgoing. =Both of them are outgoing. Pre-writing What are their differences 1.Wang Lingling has long straight hair, but Liu Lili has short straight hair. 2.Wang Lingling likes reading, but Liu Lili likes sports. 3.Wang Lingling is serious and hard-working, but Liu Lili is funny and smart. Lingling's hair is longer than Lili's. Lili likes doing sports. She is good at playing basketball. But Lingling thinks doing sports is boring and she likes reading better. L ... ...
