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课件网) Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected. Section B 3a-selfcheck Learning Objectives 1. To learn to write a passage about your lucky or unlucky day. 2. Finish Self Check. Why didn’t you hand in your science homework Before I could start working on it, 2. Why didn’t you take a shower this morning By the time I got up, 3. Why did you have to walk home from school By the time I left my school, my baby brother started crying and I had to look after him as my mother was sick . my sister had already gone into the bathroom and the bus was honking for me to hurry up. the school bus had already left 3a Can you remember a lucky or an unlucky day What happened Make some notes about what you remember. An unforgetable experience What was the date What happened first Was this lucky or unlucky Why What happened next How did the day end How did you feel about this day 写作指导： 常见的表达句型： I will always remember the date… This was the luckiest /unluckiest day of my life… When I woke up that morning… Later that day… I couldn’t believe … Then/After that… Finally… I think…. What a lucky/ unlucky day! Write a story about your lucky or unlucky day and tell your story to a partner or the class. 3a 【写作任务】 请以“My lucky day”为题，写一篇英语短文，记叙你经历过的幸运的一天，讲讲那天都发生了些什么事情，然后给某中学生英文杂志的“Your Voices”专栏投稿。 【思路点拨】 1. 定基调 体裁：记叙文 时态：过去时态 人称：第一人称和第三人称 2. 列提纲、写句子 列提纲 写句子 开篇点题 I will always remember the date September 14th, 2016.This was the luckiest day of my life. 阐述经历 幸运事件1 When I woke up that morning, it was raining. (1)_____ (我正要去公交车站坐车去上学，这时我叔叔打来了电话).2)_____(我叔叔说他可以捎我一程). I was about to go to the bus station to take the bus to school when my uncle called me up My uncle said (that) he could give me a lift in his car 列提纲 写句子 幸运事件2 (3)Later that day, _____ (我意识到我把钱包忘在家里了) and couldn’t buy lunch.My best friend Lisa said she could share her lunch with me.(4)_____(我吃了一顿免费的午餐). 幸运事件3 After that, I was praised by my math teacher.(5)_____ (我数学考试得了最高分).I couldn’t believe that I did so well, and neither could my parents. I realized that I had left my wallet at home I had a free lunch I got the highest score in the math exam 列提纲 写句子 幸运事件4 (6)That night my parents were so happy that _____ (他们答应我将给我买一辆自行车作为奖励). 总结感慨 I think that was the best day I’d had in a long time.What a lucky day! they promised me that they would buy a bike for me as a prize 3. 巧衔接 在连句成篇时，前后句之间有因果关系，可以用because或so来连接。 此外，在阐述经历时，本文使用了表示时间顺序的表达 (如When I woke up that morning ..., Later that day ..., After that ... 和That night ...) 将几件幸运的事情串联起来，这样做使得上下文之间联系更紧密，文章的脉络更清晰。 4. 成篇章 My lucky day I will always remember the date S ... ...
