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课件网) Writing 期末话题作文复习“Collecting things” Learning targets 学习目标 1. Be able to master correct writing methods 能够掌握正确的写作方法 2. Know how to improve writing ability 知道如何提高写作能力 【话题作文演练】 假设你是李华,平时喜欢收集各种票。请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文。要求80 词左右，可围绕提示内容适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 提示: 1.When did you start to collect tickets 2.How many tickets do you have now 3. How do you get them 4.Why do you like collecting tickets I love collecting different kinds of tickets, such as train tickets and tickets to museums and other places._____ 第一步: 审题 Examine the topic 审题 人称 person 时态 tense 要点 main points 要求 request 认真审题，在题 干中划出相应内容 【审题】 假设你是李华,平时喜欢收集各种票。请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文。要求80 词左右，可围绕提示内容适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 提示: 1.When did you start to collect tickets 2.How many tickets do you have now 3. How do you get them 4.Why do you like collecting tickets I love collecting different kinds of tickets, such as train tickets and tickets to museums and other places._____ 要点 要求 人称：以第一人称为主 时态：用一般现在时和一般过去时 第二步：列出提纲（ Outline） Beginning Ending Body 已给出 when to start to collect tickets how many tickets I have now how I get them ...... why I like collecting tickets ...... 第三步：激活词汇 必备词汇 亮点词汇 形容词：beautiful, different... therefore（因此，可以替换so） as well（也，放在肯定句末尾） ...not only...but also... （不仅......而且......，连接相同的结构） 第四步：选用句型 1.主+系+表 It was beautiful. 2.主+谓+宾+状语 I began to collect tickets ten years ago. 3.主+谓+宾+宾补 I ask my friends to give theirs to me as well. 对于基础一般的同学，要学会用常用的简单句句型来表达要点。 主语 谓语 宾语 状语 定语 补语 表语 句子成分 由名词、代词、不定式、动名词等来充当 主要的 句子 成分 简单句要点翻译 1.要得到它们并不难。 It is not hard to get them. 2.我们有很多票。 We have a lot of tickets. 3.我喜欢收集票。 I enjoy collecting tickets. 对于基础较好的同学来说： 一篇好的作文需要一些精彩的句型和词汇来提升文章档次。 （一）：运用从句 When I got a ticket for the first time, I found that it was beautiful. 时间状语从句 宾语从句 对于基础较好的同学来说： 一篇好的作文需要一些精彩的句型和词汇来提升文章档次。 （二）：运用亮点词汇 Therefore, I began collecting tickets. 因此 不仅......而且..... They not only help me remember different beautiful places clearly, but also make me think of my happy memories. 第五步：谋篇布局 作文主体部分： I began to collect tickets ten years ago. When I got a ticket for the first time, I found that it was beautiful. Therefore, I began collecting tickets. Up to now I have got more than 500 different tickets. It is not hard to get them. I often go traveling with my parents during the holidays, so we have a lot of tickets. I ask my friends to give theirs to me as well. 作文结尾部分： I enjoy collecting tickets. Th ... ...
