备战2024高考英语写作专项（可考文体）：03 日记/周记

备战2024高考英语写作专项（可考文体）：03 日记/周记 一、书面表达 1．（2023高一上·信阳开学考） 假定你是高一学生李华，高中生活已经过了一周，一切都很新鲜。在此，你写下一篇日记，记下了你对高中新生活的感受，并制订计划调整自己， 注意：1. 词数80左右2. 日记的开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数. Sunday Aug. 27 Sunny Now， my high school life has been on for a week. I think I will adapt myself to the high school life as soon as possible. 【答案】 Sunday Aug. 27 Sunny Now, my high school life has been on for a week. It's been an exciting yet challenging experience. I've met new teachers and classmates, and I'm impressed by their enthusiasm and dedication. The classes are more demanding, but I'm up for the challenge. To adapt to the high school life, I've made a plan for myself. First, I will set aside more time for studying and revising. I will make a habit of reading and learning English every day. Second, I will participate more in class discussions and activities to improve my communication skills and teamwork. Third, I will get involved in after-school clubs and activities to broaden my horizons and develop new interests. I believe that with these plans, I will quickly adapt to my new life in high school and make the most of this valuable opportunity. 【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文 【解析】【分析】本体是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以高一学生李华的身份 写一篇日记，记下对高中新生活的感受，并制订计划调整自己。写作背景：高中生活已经过了一周，一切都很新鲜。 考生需要根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），并进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。最后连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点评】本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。 2．（2023高一上·崂山期末） 假定你是李华，妈妈是一家旅馆的接待员。上周一，你跟随妈妈去上班，体验她一天的工作。请就此写一篇日记。 内容包括： 1）妈妈一天的工作； 2）你的感想。 注意：1）词数80左右； 2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【答案】One possible version: June 14th, 2021 Monday Sunny In order to earn a living, my mother works as a receptionist in a hotel. Last Monday, I went to work with my mother, witnessing her busy work all day. With a smile on her face, she helped each client check in and write out receipts, sometimes carrying their luggage to their room. One madam told me that my mother was superior to any of the staff, which made me very proud. After the experience, I learned that no job is superior to another. Whatever work we take up, we should put our best foot forward. 【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文 【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份写一篇日记。写作背景：妈妈是一家旅馆的接待员。上周一，你跟随妈妈去上班，体验她一天的工作。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）妈妈一天的工作；2）你的 ... ...