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课件网) 高考英语读后续写语篇练习《爱之链》The Chain of Love题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文A man was driving home one evening on a two-lane country road. Jobs, in this small, mid-western community, were very difficult to search. But he never quit looking. Ever since the factory closed, he'd ben unemployed. With winter coming, the cold had finally hit home.It was a lonely road. Not very many people had a reason to be on it, unless they were leaving. Most of his friends had already left. They had families to feed and dreams to fulfill. But he stayed on. After all, this was where he buried his mother and father. He was born here and knew the country. He could go down this road blind, and tell you what was on either side, and with his headlights not working, that came in handy.续写原文It was starting to get dark and light snow was coming down. He'd better get a move on. You know, he almost didn't see the old lady, wandering on the side of the road. But even in the dim light of day, he could se she needed help. So he pulled up in front of her and got out.Even with the smile on his face, she was worried. No one had stopped to help for the last hour or so. Was he going to hurt her He didn't look safe, and he looked poor and hungry. He could see that she was frightened, standing out there in the cold. He knew how she felt. It was that cold that only fear can put in you. He said, "I'm here to help you ma’am. Why don't you wait in your car where it's warm By the way, my name is Joe!"段首句Paragraph 1：The old lady was surprised at his words and nodded slightly.Paragraph 2：She asked him about how much she owed him.Part 2题目分析点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，语篇讲述的是在一个风雪之夜，一位老妇人的汽车出现了故障。尽管路上车辆来来往往，但始终没有人愿意下车来帮助老妇人。正绝望之时，一个落魄但善良的人Joe停下车走到老妇人身边，并表达了他愿意帮助老妇人的意愿。本次写作任务旨在帮助学生养成助人为乐、传递善意的价值观念，体现了高考所提出的立德树人要求。续写思路分析Para 1：The old lady was surprised at his words and nodded slightly.由第一段首句内容可知，第一段可描写老妇人遇到了什么困难？老妇人是否向Joe说明了遇到的困难？Joe帮助老妇人解决困难了吗？续写思路分析Para 2：She asked him about how much she owed him.由第二段首句内容可知，第二段可描写善良的Joe会有什么样的反应呢？Joe不收钱，老妇人会有什么样的反应？文章的结尾处应该怎样升华？续写思路分析语料积累———感动1. Needless to say, they were deeply moved (他们被深深地感动了), especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family.（2020.7高考山东卷）2. He was touched that I, a complete stranger, cared so much about him (如此关心他) and said he was willing to work.（2021广州2月联考）3. In a flash, with ... ...
