(
课件网) 读后续写———2024九省联考 CONTENTS 目录 01 阅读分析 02 写作流程 故事框架整理 故事大纲 Background Rising Action + Climax Falling Action Resolution 人物 人设 问题：矛盾/冲突 如何解决 故事结局 文章结尾 原文回顾 Last summer, Hilda worked as a volunteer with dolphin trainers at a sea life park. Her job was to make sure the tanks were free of any items so that the trainers could train the dolphins to fetch specific items. However, one day after cleaning, one of the dolphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper from the tank. When Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda for her carelessness. Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya. 人物介绍 主要冲突：K责备H H有错，后面改正 H没错，K道歉 故事框架整理 故事大纲 Background Rising Action + Climax Falling Action Resolution 人物 人设 问题：矛盾/冲突 如何解决 故事结局 文章结尾 人物 Maya Hilda Katherine 人设 海豚 海洋馆清理工 海豚训练师 矛盾/冲突 在Hilda打扫干净水池之后，Maya衔来了糖纸，Katherine认为Hilda没有认真工作 如何解决 ？？？ 原文回顾 Last summer, Hilda worked as a volunteer with dolphin trainers at a sea life park. Her job was to make sure the tanks were free of any items so that the trainers could train the dolphins to fetch specific items. However, one day after cleaning, one of the dolphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper from the tank. When Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda for her carelessness. Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya. 人物介绍 Hilda 决定追踪Maya 一探究竟 原文回顾 The next morning, Hilda arrived at the park early. She put on her scuba gear (水下呼吸器) and jumped into the tank for her usual, underwater sweep. Finding nothing in the tank, she climbed out of the water just in time to see Katherine jumping in on the other side. After what happened yesterday, Hilda knew what she was doing. She watched as Katherine performed her underwater search, but Hilda wasn’t surprised when she surfaced empty-handed. 次日，Hilda 下水检查没有发现任何东西 同时看到，Katherine 也下水检查，不出意外，也没有任何东西 Katherine 对Hilda 的工作不放心，不信任 原文回顾 During the tank sweeps, Maya had been swimming playfully, but now the dolphin stopped suddenly and swam to the back part of the tank where the filter (过滤) box was located. She stuck her nose down behind the box and then swam away. What was Maya doing back there Hilda wondered. She jumped back into the water and swam over to take a look behind the box, and her question was answered. Hilda then swam across the tank following Maya’s path and emerged from the water to find Katherine removing her scuba gear. As Katherine turned around, her mouth dropped open. There was Maya at the edge of the tank with a comb (梳子) in her mouth waiting for her treat. Maya 游到过滤器之后，把鼻子伸进过滤器后面 Hilda 疑惑地再次跳入水中，发现了Maya的秘密 Maya给Katherine衔来了一 ... ...
