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课件网) Unit 1 Knowing me,knowing you 写作指导 读后感 感知文体常识 本单元的作文是读完一本书、一篇文章后发表自己的见解或感悟。读后感属于议论文,是一种以表达观点感受为主的理性文体。 一、格式 1.引入话题:简要解释名言警句,介绍所读的文章、书籍或者观看的影视作品,包括名称、作者、主要内容等。 2.主体:介绍自己的思考或感悟,结合社会实例。 3.结尾:总结全文得出的结论及意义等。 二、时态 文章多用一般现在时和一般过去时态(事例),但是要根据具体情况使用其他时态。 三、写正文时应注意的问题 1.围绕一个主题来展开。 2.若无法用已学语言知识来表达某种意思,可采用“同义转换法”。 3.结尾最好用一句话来总结自己的感想或体会。 牢记写作素材 一、增色词汇 1.have both favorable and unfavorable aspects 既有好处也有坏处 2.be listed as follows如下所列 3.firstly,...secondly,...第一,……,第二,…… 4.to begin with首先 5.to make matters worse使事情更糟的是 6.through above analyses通过以上分析 7.advantages outweigh disadvantages利大于弊 8.in addition/what’s more另外 二、精彩句型 (一)精彩开头 1.This fable describes a story between a wolf and a goat. 这则寓言讲述了一头狼和一只山羊的故事。 2.The story about Mr Ye and the dragon goes like this. 叶公与龙之间的故事是这样的。 3.We all know the story about the farmer and the snake. 我们都知道农夫与蛇的故事。 (二)丰满主体 1.We have all surely had the experience of being cheated by people around us. 我们肯定都有过这样的经历,被我们身边的人欺骗。 2.One of the main reasons for doing so is that we trust others so easily. 这样做的其中一个主要原因就是我们太容易相信别人。 3.No one can prove to us to what extent we can believe it. 没人可以给我们证明我们可以在多大程度上相信它。 (三)余味结尾 1.In conclusion,I’d like to point out that we should never show mercy to people who are as evil as the snake. 最后,我想指出我们决不要可怜像蛇一样恶毒的人。 2.After reading it,I find every second in life is very precious. 读完后,我觉得人生的每一秒都是宝贵的。 3.We should spare no effort to study and overcome the difficulties before us. 我们应该不遗余力地学习,克服我们面前的困难。 示例写作步骤 【写作要求】 请你根据下面这则寓言故事结合自己的学习生活情况,发表自己对同学间关系的观点和看法。 要点:1.该故事的寓意;2.故事给我们生活的启示。 The Porcupine Dilemma Adapted from a work by Schopenhauer One cold winter night,a group of porcupines gathered together to keep warm.As soon as they started to get closer,they hurt each other with their quills,so they had to move apart.After a short time,they started to feel cold again,so they moved closer together.But again they had to move away because of the pain caused by the other porcupines’ quills.After repeating this process a few times,they eventually found the ideal distance where they could feel warm while managing not to hurt each other. 注意:写作词数应为80左右。 【审题谋篇】 体裁 议论文 人称 第一人称 时态 一般现在时 框架 第一段 豪猪取暖给我们的启示 第二段 论证自己的观点 第三段 总结自己的观点 【遣词造句】 1.词汇 (1) 正如……所说 (2) 保持适当 ... ...
