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2024届高考英语作文复习专项:2024年3月苏锡常镇一模读后续写--承载爱意的小红罐 讲义素材

日期:2026-04-01 科目:英语 类型:高中素材 查看:76次 大小:21229B 来源:二一课件通
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读后续写原题呈现: One of my favorite possessions is a little red can. It sits among my collections, looking somewhat old and out of place. But this can is special. It has a history. It was dear to me when I was younger, but mean even more to me now. ———【确认是回忆过去,联想到续写两句里的red can 和 decades later ——— 可以猜到“主人公我和祖母之间可能因为这个‘red can’产生了更紧密的关系”】 ———【接下来要回忆过去,可以猜一下,这个red can是怎么来的】 I've always loved to visit my grandparents in Cleburne, Texas, and as anyone in the family can tell you, there is always a gathering around the dining room table for meals and conversations so that we can keep in touch closely. It is important to keep in touch with the family members since we are busy with our own business, so my family members keep the tradition to have the gathering every month. We enjoy the moment when all of us meet in a place and communication helps us to solve the problem of isolation【祖父母家能让我们不再isolated】. As the first grandbaby, though, I was at a slight disadvantage. When I sat in the dining chair, only my nose could reach the table. Cleburne is a small town with a small population, and the phone book could only lift me an inch. So, Grandma and Grandpa came up with the idea of the little red can.【这个red can估计早就有了,毕竟也用了定冠词“the”,说明特指 ——— 结合续写第二句的proudly,是不是可以把“爱和亲情的传承”当成是本文的主旨呢】 It was about ten inches high, made of tin, and painted a glorious shiny red【描写red can的词,可以用在续写中(具体看情况)】. It worked perfectly, enabling me to bang away on the table with my little spoon and cup as I tried to keep up with the joyful talks around the table【让主人公怀念的场景,可以呼应】. After I finished a meal, I was placed on the floor, and the can was opened, and all sorts of surprises kept me busy【让主人公怀念的场景,可以呼应】 while the adults visited. The can was full of lovely dolls which attracted little girls like me greatly. Besides, there were fresh and novel items that were mysterious to me and left me to explore. 【red can里的惊喜,是点名red can这个关键信息的句子,这里的内容可以在续写里用上】 1. 续写词数应为150词左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Pretty soon, other grandbabies started to arrive, and each of them had their own turn on the little red can. Decades later, Grandma proudly pulled out the little red can again when I traveled to Cleburne with my daughter. 如何分析材料 Step 1:(仅代表个人建议)建议先读后边的续写首句,再读材料。先根据续写首句,猜一下大概写什么,然后方便去原文找一些【可以用到的词汇】 1.Pretty soon, other grandbabies started to arrive, and each of them had their own turn on the little red can. 2.Decades later, Grandma proudly pulled out the little red can again when I traveled to Cleburne with my daughter. 3.发现关键词: - little red can - Grandma - grandbabies 4.猜主旨:和love and affection亲情有关 5.提问:red can 和本文有什么联系 6.提问:为什么Grandma是proud ... ...

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