(
课件网) 驴唇不对马嘴 画龙点睛 Lead in: a guessing game Learning Objectives At the end of this lesson, we are able to 1. Learn to get the main plot and analyze the character’s emotion flow. 2. Learn to master skills to make emotional description more vivid and specific. 3. Learn to be gratefulto our parents (the ones we love). 项目 体裁 词数 主题 情节 2020年1月 记叙文 350 人与动物/人与自我 男孩离家去读大学,家里的小狗Poppy闷闷不乐。为了让 Poppy开心，男孩父母又买了一条小狗跟Poppy做伴。 2020年7月 记叙文 339 人与动物/人与自然 我和妻子Elli在北极熊研究营地做饭时，一只幼熊闻饭香而来。我和妻子尝试各种方法想吓走它。人熊之战一触即发。 2021年1月 记叙文 338 人与社会 万圣节前夕，作者为了证明自己比弟弟摘回家的南瓜大，勇猛地将自己的脑袋塞进南瓜,结果却拔不出来了。 2021年6月 记叙文 324 人与社会 爸爸从小赚钱补贴家用。这个暑假我开始挣钱，我却不愿意把钱交给爸爸。 Continuation Writing in NMET Elements of a story Character Surroundings/settings Feeling Who When Where What Why How 5W1H A bowl of noodles —My story 原文再现 That night, I quarreled with my mother, then stormed out of the house. While on the road, I remembered that I did not have any money in my pocket. I did not even take my cell phone with me to make a call home. At the same time, I went through a noodle shop, and I suddenly felt very hungry. I wished for a bowl of noodles, but I had no money! The seller saw me standing before the counter and asked, “Hey, little girl, you want to eat a bowl ” “ But . .. but I do not carry money ...” I shyly replied. “Okay, I’ll treat you, ” the seller said, “Come in, I will cook you a bowl, ”A few minutes later the owner brought me a steaming bowl of noodles, After eating some pieces, I cried. “What is it ” He asked.“ Nothing. I am just touched by your kindness!" I said as I wiped my tears, "Even a stranger on the street gives me a bowl of noodles and my mother, after a quarrel, chased me out the house. She is cruel!!” The seller sighed, “Girl, why did you think so Think again. I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you felt that way. Your mother has been taking care of you since you were little, why were you not grateful and why did you hurt your mom ” I was really surprised after hearing that. Why did I not think of that A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, and my mother has raised me since I was little and I have never felt so, not even a little. 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； Paragraph 1: Just at that moment, many memories comeback into my mind. _____ _____ Paragraph 2: When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired._____ _____ 试题再现 where who what when why I Mom The seller Stormed out of home-- no money-- treat noodles--decided to apologize that night I quarreled with my mother Task 1 Read for information/plot home street home tense simple past 1. Beginning 2. Rising part 5. Ending 3. ... ...
