(
课件网) 读后续写：良知和礼物 （ 成长主题） 教学步骤1. 分析文本，梳理故事情节，完成情节的语法填空。2. 分析本文的故事山。3. 根据前文伏笔，结合续写段落首句，进行自问自答式Self Question & Answer进行故事情节的推测；4. 根据推测，结合微写作技能，完成对故事回落和结尾部分描写，注重对前文回应，加强协调性；5. 点评优秀作品，提供范文。6. 提供同样主题的续写，供参考和仿写。 Jenny stared at the store window longingly (渴望地) . There was nothing in this world that she wanted more than a happy Hanah doll and all that currently separated her from the hottest doll of the holiday season was a thin piece of glass and 29.95 plus tax. Unfortunately, Jenny didn't even have the 95 cents, so she let out a deep sigh and continued walking home. Suddenly, a pink rectangle (矩形) in the snow caught her eye. Jenny walked over and realized it was a leather wallet She removed it from the snow, and opened the wallet to find a thick pile of folded green bills and two plastic cards. One was a credit card and the other an ID. Jenny stared at the old woman in her ID photo. The woman had a beautiful smile that reminded Jenny of her grandma. Jenny sighed and then she put the wallet into her purse. She turned around and walked in the direction from which she came. Jenny's heart beat quickly as she entered the store. She had long dreamed about this moment, but something didn't feel right about it. As she approached a neat pile of Happy Hannah dolls, she pushed away her feelings.She grasped one Happy Hannah doll. As Jenny approached the register,the Happy Hannah Show theme song began playing. It was her mobile phone. It was her grandma. In one hand she held the Happy Hannah doll and in the other she held the phone on which her grandma was calling. Jenny's heart was filled with love and appreciation as she thought of her sweet old grandma. She put the doll down and picked up the phone call. "Hi,Grandma I'm going to be a little bit late tonight. I've got to drop something off...Yeah, it was good......OK...Alright... I love you too." Jenny left the store and walked through the melting snow all the way to the other side of the town. She thought of her grandma as she rang the bell at 301 West Street. P1:The woman who answered the door had been crying and looked upset and anxious. P2:The woman took the wallet smilingly. 第一个环节：确定文章的要素 Characters: 人：Jenny,Jenny’s grandma, an old woman 物：a lost wallet (包括：credit card and ID), a Happy Hannah Doll Feelings: How did Jenny’s emotion change (list all the reasons) 第二个环节：确定文章的Theme 主人公克服诱惑，拾金不昧。（overcome the temptation, return the wallet to its owner） 如何通过文章列出的要素去体现主题？ Why did the author mention her Grandma What do you know about the sentence: Something didn’t feel right Did Jenny get her doll at last 失主给她钱，然后她去买自己的礼物；或者失主给她买礼物；或者Grandma给她买礼物。 这些都可以，还有一个更好的选择： Jenny看到失主的开心，并 ... ...
