2024届湛江市二模英语读后续写解题步骤讲义

4月11日 湛二模 读后续写解题步骤 第一步：关键信息：从第一段及每段第一句快速获取记叙文基本要素： 人物：Father:Brad Howard、 Son: Bradley、 teacher、 Classmates 时间：on the morning of the important day-As the class started-as the class progressed-After school 地点：in class 原因：Brad, a Texas father, had enough of his son’s disruptive behavior in physics class. 事情：He decided to sit beside his son in class. （在考场上观察部分学生写的续写中，地点出错，应是忽略了读取基本要素这一步骤） 第二步：预测：首句预测内容 But as the class progressed, something unexpected happened. 想一想名词、代词：class, something unexpected After school, Bradley hesitantly approached his dad with newfound appreciation. 想一想名词：Bradley, newfound appreciation 第三步：画出原文表达词块（有助于续写中延用原文语言风格） 动词（翻译，造句）： had enough of Take matters into his own hands Gave his a final warning Made a bold promise Show up Sit beside Follow through with his threat Woke him up Was determined to Keep his word Headed to Couldn’t believe that Make him regret his behaviour Feel all eyes on him Sense the judgement Look like Is serious about Hold back a laugh 句子学习(翻译)： It struck him what he had said. The sight of Brad sitting next to Bradley in class was a source of amusement for Bradley’s friend, who found the situation ridiculous. Bradley, on the other hand, was less than thrilled. The embarrassment of having his own father sitting beside him in classs was enough to make him regret his behaviour. One of his friend whispered across the hallway, trying to hold back a laugh. Bradley whispered, his cheeks turning a deep shade of red. 第四步：十句定位法 But as the class progressed, something unexpected happened.1)动作/心理描写；2）语言：对话；3)环境描写； 4）关键信息（根据人物个性而定）；5）紧扣P2首句。 After school, Bradley hesitantly approached his dad with newfound appreciation. 6）紧扣P2首句，心理/动作描写；7）关键信息（根据人物个性）；8）语言/心理/环境描写；9）结局（解决问题）；10）升华主题（分类或总结） 第五步：构思，设计情节 But as the class progressed, something unexpected happened.1)动作/心理描写；It was the physics class that Bradley disliked, so at first he couldn’t concentrate his attention on the teacher.2）语言：对话；But later at the sight of his father, who were listening carefully while taking notes intensely, Bradley persuaded himself to follow the teacher. “Just for once,” Bradley thought to himself, “Father won’t be here next time.”3)环境描写（原文延伸）；Out of expectation, the whole class were full of liveliness as Bradley’s father led all to respond to the teacher actively, including Bradley. 4）关键信息（根据人物个性而定）There came the Q &A time, Bradley was asked to answer one of the questions. To everyone’s surprise, he managed it! 5）紧扣P2首句。“What a day!” Bradley couldn’t help to whisper to himself, “Not only did Dad set an example for me in class, but also develop my interest in physics. ” After school, Bradley hesi ... ...