焦点 11 读写之书面表达-备战2024年中考英语复习之优秀生拔高特训（上海市）（含解析）

焦点11 读写之书面表达 备战2024年中考英语复习之优秀生拔高特训 A 适当的放松有助于缓解学生压力，使他们保持精力充沛，促进其身心健康。为更有效地助力学生成长，某校针对“你最喜欢的放松方式”，对某年级1000名学生进行了抽样调查，下图是相关的统计结果。 请你用两段话写一篇英文短文，第一段简要说明图表内容，第二段从图表中选出一项你喜欢的方式，结合自己的经历，谈谈你喜欢的放松方式的好处。 要求：1. 词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 The school did a survey among 1, 000 students about different students’ favorite ways to relax. Here are the results. _____ 【答案】 The school did a survey among 1, 000 students about different students’ favorite ways to relax. Here are the results. 41% of the students like doing exercise.28% of the students think it’s relaxing to have trips. And the percentage of the students who prefer to spend time with their friends is 22%. The other 9% choose other ways to relax. As for me, I am interested in doing exercise. It helps me reduce stress and keep active. Last month, when the teacher told us we would have a math test. I felt so worried that I couldn’t fall asleep until midnight. As a result, I was tired in class and I couldn’t follow my math teacher. To be less stressed out, I played basketball with my friend. We talked and played, sharing our problems and happiness. It was basketball that brought me courage to speak out my problems. I felt relaxed and active. In the following days, my friend often led me to think about some math problems when we practiced basketball on the playground. Gradually, I could do better in math. To relax myself, I will keep developing good habits. I will travel, have a party with my friend or go to the movies. I will also learn to communicate more with others while doing these things. Only in this way can I be better. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：根据图表内容完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主，可自由发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要说明图表内容； 第二步，结合自己的经历，说明自己喜欢的放松方式； 第三步，总结自己的放松方式，以及这些方式的好处。 [亮点词汇] ①fall asleep入睡 ②communicate with sb.和某人交流 ③keep doing sth一直做某事 [高分句型] ①And the percentage of the students who prefer to spend time with their friends is 22%.（who引导的定语从句） ②I felt so worried that I couldn’t fall asleep until midnight.（so...that引导的结果状语从句） ③It was basketball that brought me courage to speak out my problems.（强调句） ④Only in this way can I be better.（倒装句） B 2023年11月5日，第一届全国学生(青年)运动会在广西体育中心开幕。举办青运会是推动新时代青少年体育改革发展，增强青少年体质、促进竞技体育后备人才培养的重要举措，对加快推进教育强国和体育强国建设具有重要意义。为了鼓励更多的中学生积极参加体育锻炼，你校英语网站正在以“My Favourite Sport”为题向同学们征稿。请你根据下列提示写一篇英语短文投稿。 写作要点： 1. 你最喜爱的运动的名称； 2. 你最喜爱这项运动的理由； 3. 你开展这项运动的时间、地点等等； 4. ... ...