(
课件网) 八下 期中复习课件 unit 1-unit 5 书面表达复习 本单元的话题是“健康和急救”。针对该话题，常见的考查角度是针对健康问题提出建议。体裁以记叙文、说明文为主，时态可能涉及一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时，多采用第二人称。行文中注意灵活运用表达建议的句型，避免句式单一。 话题概述 unit 1 以“健康与急救”为话题,要求学生能够描述病情并给出建议。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点: 1.能够用英语描述疾病或事故发生的时间、地点和相关情况; 2.能够叙述处理问题的经过和结果; 3.能够使用should, had better等情态动词就如何保持健康提供相关的建议。 发生什么事故 什么健康问题 描述症状 提出建议和劝告 养成良好的饮食和生活习惯 单元作文 健康和急救 Let’s practice. 文 体裁 一般 时 时态 第 人称 人称 . 话题 ①审 应用 现在 一/三 介绍习惯及其影响，并给出建议 Joe由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、背疼，并且睡不好，他想要作为校医的你给一些建议。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文介绍一下他的情况，并给出你的建议。 要点:1.他平时有什么样的生活习惯； 2.他的不良习惯对他造成了什么影响； 3.你的建议。 要求：1. 结构完整；要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2. 词数80左右。 Find out the main structure to help you plan your writing. 引出话题 提出建议 习惯 症状 建议 愿望 Joe is a student in our school. He is used to playing… / He often sits in the same way… without moving. Now he has a headache, a sore back … He doesn’t sleep well at night… I think he should… He shouldn’t… He should… and… I think if he has a good rest, he will feel better soon. 表达愿望 Beginning Body Ending Let’s draft What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph How to keep healthy 1.To introduce the habits 2. To describe his problems 3. To give advice 4. To express your hope He is used to playing… He spends lots of time on… He doesn’t … He also… He has+a/an/the+疾病 He has+a/an+部位-ache He has+a+sore+身体部位 He feels + adj.… He should do…/He is supposed to do… He’d better do… /It’s best for him to do … It’s important for sb. to do sth. If him...,he should... I think if he has a good rest, he will feel better soon. I hope my advice can help him to feel better. How to make the passage better 习惯和病症可以用因果关系（so/because/ so…that…）的连词合为一句来描述。 多条建议可以增加连接词使文章变得更有逻辑感： First / Moreover / What’s more / Also / Besides / In addition One possible version. Joe is a student in our school. He is used to playing computer games. He spends a lot of time on the computer every day. Besides, he has a headache, a sore back and sore eyes because of sitting in the same way for too long without moving. He doesn’t sleep well at night, so he feels tired every day. Here is some advice for him. First of all, I think it’s a best way for him to take breaks away from the computer instead of sitting there in the same way for too long. Then, he can also listen to music to relax before going to sleep. What’s more, it’s important to develop a healthy hobby such as playing basketball, reading and so on. I think if he has a good re ... ...
