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课件网) UNIT 8 LITERATURE Section Ⅴ Writing 1.了解撰写读后续写时需要的基本信息；学会内容表达的完整性、行文的连贯性和遣词造句的准确性。（语言能力，学习能力） 2.能够借助已知的关键信息，适当补充辅助信息，写好读后续写。（语言能力） 读 后 续 写 本单元的写作任务是读后续写。读后续写是一种围绕某一具体的主题语境，基于书面语篇记叙文连续性文本的文体形式，在根据语境线索理解语篇内容、分析语篇结构，并续写语篇内容的过程中，运用语言技能获取、梳理、整合语言知识，同时运用所学语言知识创造性地表达语篇意义，并通过运用各种学习策略，提高理解和表达效果的题型。读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的综合性语言测试。 探究点1 教材范例提炼 借助以下问句分析范文故事内容： 1.Where did the story happen？ 2.When did the story happen？ 3.What happened 4.How did the main character feel？Why？ 探究点2 写作应用体验 写作典例 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The sea's surprise Jim and Andy walked along the beach, looking for an adventure. They joked that some day they would find a talking fish or a mermaid（美人鱼） or a bottle with a treasure map inside. So far they had only found shells， rocks and seaweed. Today， though， was different. The boys felt excited. Sea crabs scampered on the rocks， up one side and down the other. They were quick and lively. The tide didn't seem to ever wash them away. Then Jim saw a fish. It was stranded on the beach, just flopping around. “Can it talk？” Andy asked. “It looks like any other fish，” Jim said. He picked it up gently and carried it to the water. “Do you think it will grant us any wishes？” Andy laughed. The boys watched as the silver fish sped off through the water.“No. Maybe next time.” Jim grinned. As the two friends walked farther down the beach they came upon a bottle. It was green with a cork（软木塞） in the mouth. “Our luck will change. Does it have a map inside or a genie（精灵）？” Andy joked. Andy reached down and picked up the bottle. He rubbed it. Nothing happened. He pulled on the cork. Nothing happened. He shook it. Nothing happened. “Try the cork again. I bet the genie is waiting for us to release him. Or we'll find a treasure map and have a real adventure，” Jim exclaimed. Andy tugged again on the cork. He wiggled it back and forth. He twisted it around and around. Finally it popped out without breaking. Andy shook the bottle. Nothing came out. Looking inside he couldn't see anything. Jim looked too and shook his head. Empty. “It's just an old wine bottle，” Jim complained. He grabbed the bottle and tossed it back onto the sand. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 The bottle hit a rock and shattered into many pieces._____ _____ _____ Two boys ran after it._____ _____ _____ 分步推进 Step 1 初读获取基本信息 1.基本信息 2.故事情节 Jim和Andy想在海边寻宝→Jim挽救了一条搁浅的鱼→他们碰到了一个瓶子→？？？ Beginning: Jim and Andy walked along the beach, looking for treasure.→Jim saw a stranded fi ... ...
