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课件网) 第五讲 5步建构,考场作文速成 典型例题 (2021新高考全国Ⅰ卷) 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil when they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意:续写词数应为150左右。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared. _____ The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. _____ _____ When Mrs.Meredith heard of John’s idea,she thought it was a good one, too.So she praised John for his proposal,and offered him some advice.Very soon the children were busy popping the corn,while their mother went out to buy the paper bags.When she came back,she brought Bernard with her.All the children came surrounding Bernard and they gave a basket to Bernard.The basket was full of paper bags which were filled with popcorn. With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.And much sooner than could be expected,Bernard returned with an empty basket. Never before had he earned so much money in his life.When he found that it was all to be his,he was so happy that he could hardly speak,but his bright smiling face spoke for him.People began to watch for the“little popcorn boy”, who earned some money to take home every week.All this was because of John’s bright idea. 5步建构,续写成功 第一步 抓大意,定主题 速读所给信息,了解文章大意,确定写作主题。 文章大意 一对双胞胎在母亲节为母亲做早饭,给母亲惊喜 ... ...
