(
课件网) 人教六下复习课件 How tall are you 主讲教师：Cici 时间：2024.3.8 写作指导 Part 5 阅读理解+方法点拨 写作指导 我们在本单元主要学习了如何对两者进行比较，如身言高、体重、鞋码等。你和家人的身高、体重等分别是怎样的呢 请以“My family and I”为题写一1篇小文章来向我们描述一下吧!要求:不少于 50 词。 写 作 题 目 写作指导 写 作 思 路 首先介绍自己的三口之家。 I have a happy family of 3 ... 然后具体描述家人的外貌特征，并对这些特征进行比较，还可进一步描述精确的比较结果。 My father is ... metres. She is ... than ... I'm ... kilograms heavier than ... 写作指导 写 作 思 路 最后介绍自己和家人的互动形式,抒发我爱我家之情。 I often ... with ... How happy ... 写作指导 积 累 可 用 词 汇 比较人物特征的词汇 描述身高、体重的度量单位 younger 更年轻的 older更年长的 kilogram 千克，公斤 thinner 更瘦的 heavier 更重的 centimetre 厘米 taller 更高的 shorter 更矮的;更短的 metre 米 写作指导 积 累 万 能 句 子 ① I have a happy family of three ... 我有一个幸福的三口之家…… ② My father is the tallest in our family. 我的爸爸是我们家个子最高的。 ③ I'm five centimetres shorter than my mother. But I'm two kilograms heavier thar her. 我比妈妈矮五厘米。但我比她重两公斤。 范文赏析 My family and I I have a happy family of three: my father, my mother and I. My father is the tallest in our family. He is 1.90 metres.He is a PE teacher. He is very strong. My mother is a doctor. She is 1.65 metres. She is 38 years old. And she is younger than my father. I am a student. I'm 5 centimetres shorter than my mother. But I am 2 kilograms heavier than her. 范文赏析 I often play basketball with my father on weekends and my mum will cheer for us. How happy we are! I love my famialy so much! 范文赏析 My family and I I have a happy family of three: my father, my mother and I. My father is the tallest in our family. He is 1.90 metres.He is a PE teacher. He is very strong. My mother is a doctor. She is 1.65 metres. She is 38 years old. 能够以简洁的语句介绍家庭成员和家庭氛围。 正确运用了形容词的最高级形式描述人物特征。 范文赏析 And she is younger than my father. I am a student. I'm 5 centimetres shorter than my mother. But I am 2 kilograms heavier than her. I often play basketball with my father on weekends and my mum will cheer for us. How happy we are! I love my family so much! 正确运用了比较级比较人物特征。 能够准确描述比较的结果。 正确运用了转折连词but，使我们对比较结果印象深刻。 能够正确运用感叹句升华结尾。 译文 我和我的家人 我有一个幸福的三口之家:我的父亲，我的母亲和我。 我父亲是我们家最高的。他身高1.90米。他是一名体育老师。他很强壮。我妈妈是医生。她身高1.65 米。她38岁。她比我父亲年轻。我是一个学生。我比妈妈矮五厘米。但我比她重两公斤。 周末我经常和爸爸打篮球，妈妈会为我们加油。我们好开心啊!我特 别爱我的家人! 小练笔 假设你是Amy，请根据表格内容写一篇小短文，用比较级介绍你和你的朋友Sarah 在年龄、身高及体重等方面的情况，不少于40 词。 写 作 题 目 Name Amy Sarah Age 13 12 Height 1.55 m 1.52 m Weight 40 kg 35 kg 小练笔 用形容词比较级描述人物可分三步 ... ...
