2024年中考英语二轮复习突破 -书面表达（上海专用）（含解析）

书面表达17篇 1．（2024·上海杨浦·二模）Write a paragraph in at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情境，写一段不少于60个单词的文字) 近日，由于电动自行车引发的火灾屡屡发生。今年2月23日，南京市雨花区一处住宅小区因电动自行车引发整栋楼大火，造成15人遇难。2月26日至3月4日，上海接连发生因造规停放电动自行车和在非指定地点充电引发的火灾，3名车主被拘留。 你是玫瑰花园小区 (Rose Garden Estate) 的居民张磊 (Zhang Lei)。你的小区有不少外国友人租住，他们中也有不少人是电动自行车的使用者。小区物业请你协助参与对这些外国友人的安宣传工作。任务1：撰写一份演讲稿，对他们进行安全宣传和教育。 任务2：设计一份告居民书，张贴在电梯中，起到警示告诫的作用。 请选其中的一项任务完成。 提示： ① 参考词汇： electric scooter电动自行车， non-motor vehicle park非机动车停车场，charge the battery给电瓶充电。 ② 若选择任务一，请在答题纸写作部分的首行书写 Dear friends；若选择任务二，请在写作部分答题纸的首行书写To all electric scooter owners。以上内容不计入总词数。 ③ 写作内容中不得出现姓名、校名等真实信息。 _____ 【答案】参考范文： Dear Friends, I’m Zhang Lei who lives in the Rose Garden estate. Due to the severe fires caused by inappropriate charging and illegal parking of the electric bicycles in Nanjing and Shanghai recently, I would like to recommend you a couple of measures that can be taken to avoid the recurrence of similar events. First and foremost, parking your e-bikes in the corridor is definitely not allowed, which means that you should park them in the designated places. In addition, charging the battery of e-bikes at home is likely to result in uncontrollable fires, which is why you can only do it in the open-air areas. Moreover, it is illegal behavior for people to use the elevators with their e-bikes. If there is a fire in an elevator, people will have no chance to escape from it. Therefore, when you see people riding e-bikes into the elevator, it is necessary for you to warn them about the potential consequences. Hopefully, we can create a safe living environment. Thank you for listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐述演讲稿的目的。 第二步，提出需要注意的内容。 第三步，最后结束文章。 [亮点词汇] ①due to因为，由于 ②recommend推荐，提醒 ③potential潜在的 [高分句型] ① I would like to recommend you a couple of measures that can be taken to avoid the recurrence of similar events.（that引导的定语从句，动词不定式用作目的状语） ②Therefore, when you see people riding e-bikes into the elevator, it is necessary for you to warn them about the potential consequences. （it is+adj.+to do 句型） 2．（2024·上海奉贤·二模）Write a passage in at least 60 words according to the following situation. (根据以下情境，请补全标题“ will make my summer holiday meaningful”后，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号 不占格) 中考结束后的暑假，你有机会去参加各类社会实践活动。如去当一回社区志愿者，奉献 ... ...