2024届高考英语复习写作专练读后续写练习写作讲义素材

读后续写练习写作专项训练 第二节（满分25分）2024届高三第二次学业质量评价T8联考英语试题（读后续写） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When we were finally dismissed from the last class of the day, the students streamed out of the classrooms. It was another boring day after school. I dragged my feet home as I sighed. Yet another uneventful day, I thought. Little did I know that the day would take a turn for the worse The lift lobby （电梯间） of my flat was old and dirty. The walls, which were painted white, had been dirtied over many years. I reached my flat’s lobby, and pressed the lift button and went in. Just then, Mrs Lim, my elderly neighbour, hobbled （蹒跚） in. She looked ancient with tissue paper white hair, wearing a faded old-fashioned dress. I held the lift door open, flashing a friendly smile, and politely greeted her. I asked her how she felt that day and pressed the buttons. She thanked me for being so polite, then we were silent for the rest of the ride. The lift fell down increasingly fast. There were loud clanking sounds here and there while the lift grew slower and slower. My heart beat hard and fast as my hands turned cold and wet with sweat. Unfortunately, the lift came to an abrupt stop at the fifth floor. I pressed the buttons hard several times, but it was of no help. The lights on the buttons had gone out. It soon dawned on me that we were trapped. An icy fear crept up my spine. Mrs Lim was hysterical （歇斯底里）. “We will never get out!” she cried with her face pale. It had become a colourless mask. I had no time to lose. I pressed the bell in the lift immediately. The sound was surely deafening, but what other choice did I have Mrs Lim burst into tears. I tried my very best to comfort her, telling her that everything would be all right and that we needed to find out how to get out safely. Mrs Lim began having trouble breathing, and I immediately helped her sit down and loosened her collar. Paragraph 1: Several minutes passed, but no help came. _____ _____ _____ Paragraph 2: Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard the firefighters on the other side of the lift door. _____ _____ _____ 试题分析 1.主要人物: ①I: a student ②Mrs. Lim: my elderly neighbor 2.视角：第一人称 3.主题：人与社会（被困电梯，如何与邻居老太太一起脱险） 4.前文故事梗概: 放学回家，感觉又过了无聊的一天。哪里知道，后来的事情，让人感觉更糟糕。在老旧电梯碰到老邻居Mrs. Lim，蹒跚走进电梯。跟她打了招呼，然后就安静地等电梯上行。突然电梯快速地下坠，后来在五楼停了下来。接着，电梯里一片漆黑。邻居老太太吓得歇斯底里地哭喊。虽然我也感到恐惧，但我还是不断安慰她，帮助她镇定下来。…… 5.续写安排: 第一段: Several minutes passed, but no help came. ①（与前一句和前文衔接）当时电梯里的场景 ②（过渡）我们的表现 ③（承上启下）自救无果，等待救援 第二段: Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard the firefighters on the other side of the lift door. ①（与前一句衔接）我们的反应 ②（过渡）消防员是怎样救我们的 ③（收尾）事后回想 下水作文 Sever ... ...