(
课件网) 十句定纲法 内容：与原文的融洽度（读懂原文）＋社会主义核心价值观 语言：所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。 篇章结构：结构清晰，衔接得当。 评分标准 读不懂原文怎么办？ 行业PPT模板http:///hangye/ 读原文，5W1H P1 P2 给定句，定事件走向 首段得知：人物/大致事件 尾段：具体事件/态度 P1 P2 首句：故事结局走向 My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children. It’s amazing to watch as they discover发现 their world. While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine 阳光, our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the doorway 门口. Beneath the steps台阶 was a baby red squirrel. We watched it from a distance 远远地, not wanting to disturb 打扰 it or scare off 吓跑 its mother. But after a long wait – and looking all around our house for signs of a nest 巢窝 or a mother – we realized the tiny 微小地 squirrel was lost. 人物：My husband /My children/I /the squirrel 大致事件：we found a squirrel His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a child, he would play in the grass some and then run back to Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material 材料. 具体事件：we raised the squirrel and he lived a happy life in our home. 态度：相处和谐 One day in the trees, Squirt met（meet遇见） up with 偶遇 a family of gray灰色的 squirrels. One night, Squirt didn’t come back to our house and it rained hard. 故事结局：小松鼠在遇到灰松鼠一家后彻夜未归 【2018读后续写浙江】It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. 人物： 大致事件： My dad / me / my uncle we went to uncle’s farm for a vocation In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 具体事件： 态度: My dad and I took a horse ride. Uncle was worried about us. Paragraph1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse． Paragraph2 We had no idea where we were and it got dark． 结局： We got lost for tracking a rabbit…… 问题二：没东西写怎么办？ 仅限于读懂原文不会写的情况， 如果你会写请不要模仿（仅供参考） 如果你一个字也读不懂， ... ...
