(
课件网) 高中作文/读后续写真题解读+写作 构思+高分范文点拨 一、链接真题训练解读叙事元素和结构 一、搭建写作 三、点评高范文点拨关键技巧 一、链接真题训练解读叙事元素和结构 一、搭建写作 三、点评高范文点拨关键技巧 一、链接真题训练解读叙事元素和结构 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文。 【2023年全国新高考I卷 】 When I was in middle school my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest, I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did. So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail His reply: "Because I love your stories. If you're willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this." Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try.I chose Paul Revere's horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse's mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny, and unlikely to be anyone else's choice. What did the horse think, as sped through the night Did he get tired Have doubts Did he want to quit I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like revere's horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I cheeked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half- dozen books on paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them. When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud and said, "Great. Now, write it again." I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn't win.I wouldn't care. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位 置作答。 A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news._____ I went to my teacher' office after the award presentation._____ 译文： 当我在中学的时候，我的社会学老师让我参加一个写作比赛，我 想都没想就拒绝了。我不喜欢写作。我的家庭来自巴西，所以英语只 是我的第二语言。写作对我来说是如此困难和痛苦，我的老师允许我 通过表演一出戏来展示我关于泰坦尼克号沉没的论文，在戏里我扮演 了所有的角色。没有人比他笑得更厉害了。那他为什么突然强迫我做 这样的事呢？我肯定会失败的。 他的回答：“因为我喜欢你的故事。如果你愿意努力，我认为你很 有可能获得这份工作。”受到他的话的鼓舞，我同意试一试。我选择保 罗 里维尔的马作为我的主题。保罗 里维尔是波士顿的一名银匠(银匠)。 1775年4月18日晚上，他骑马前往列克星敦，警告人们英国士兵要来了。 我的故事将直接由马来叙述。这不是个好主意，但很有趣，不太可能是 别人的选择。马在黑夜中疾驰时在想什么呢？他累了吗？有疑问吗？他 想辞职吗？ ... ...
