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课件网) 山西省一模读后续写题目 I recently went SKYDIVING! It's something I've been talking about doing since last year, but to be honest, it was planned super last minute… like within a matter of a few weeks. It all started when I ran into a friend of mine walking home from a local festival earlier this summer. We started chatting about what we'd both been up to this summer and somehow got on the subject of both being interested in going skydiving someday. My friend, Denny, said he'd be on board if I really wanted to schedule a jump and I was so excited to finally have someone to go with! Later that night, we texted back and forth and decided on our jump date a few weeks in the future. When the very Sunday came, we were both FULL of excitement for our first skydiving experience. He had been bungee jumping before and I'd done my fair share of zip- lining, but neither of us figured that either of those of experiences would prepare us for what we had in store. The drive there didn't happen without a slight delay. As soon as we got off the through-way on to the exit towards the small town where the skydiving facility was, Denny's car started to make a strange noise, forcing us to pull over on a busy interstate (州际公路). Only 20 minutes away from WNY Skydiving (the place where we were going), we discovered we had a flat tyre (轮胎). At that point, I felt pretty defeated. Our scheduled time was 4 pm — the last appointment time of the day — so I figured they wouldn't be able to wait for or delay the operations for us since we were racing against the light. Para 1: We called American Automobile Association (AAA) and hoped for the best. Para 2: We were informed we were the final hump of the night…the "sunset jump". 文本分析： 讲述了两个孩子第一次跳伞的经历，跳伞前的谋划，前往目的地路途 中所发生的波折，求助AAA帮忙修车，最终赶上了所谓的“落日”跳伞 的机会。本篇读后续写对学生而言较难的原因在于，在叙述故事背景 时铺垫了太长的文本，导致主体事件在一番费力后才浮出水面。此外， 陌生词汇陌生的经历尤其是跳伞这种极限运动，让很多孩子望而却步。 有所见有所为才会有所写，因此难度还是有的。 续写情节发展： Para 1: We called American Automobile Association (AAA) and hoped forthe best. 等待 AAA的焦急心理/AAA的援助(修车的过程) 修好车，直奔目的地。 Para 2:We were informed we were the final hump of the night…thesunset jump". 第一次跳伞的紧张，兴奋/跳伞过程中欣赏到的美景/难忘的经历续写下水 Paragraph 1: We called American Automobile Association (AAA) and hoped for the best. With every passing, excruciating minute, disappointment threatened to drown the day's bubbling excitement. The possibility of us missing the jump after coming so close was almost unbearable. Then, suddenly, the rumble a tow truck sliced through the tension. With practiced efficiency, the driver swiftly changed our tyre, reigniting a silver of hope. After paying for his service, we dashed into the ablaze sunset. The moment we parked the car at the WN ... ...
