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课件网) 【2024级成都二诊 书面表达】 你校英文报正举行以“The Power of Smile”为题的征文比赛，请结 合自身经历写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.自身经历；2.你的感悟。 注意： 1.词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。 The Power of Smile 审题 体裁：短文(夹叙夹议文)———微笑的力量 时态：一般过去时/一般现在时 人称：第一人称/第三人称 谋篇布局 结构：1. 事例→观点；2. 观点→事例；3. 观点→事例→观点 写作难点： 1.smile一词是指微笑这个表情动作还是引申含义？(eg.面对困难、挫折 等不轻易放弃，乐观勇敢面对 ) 2.power是一种什么力量？(不能泛泛而谈，要具体化) 3.写亲身经历时叙述部分容易写得平淡乏味怎么突破？(添加关于心理 活动、表情动作等描述) 4.写感悟时要合情合理、恰如其分，不要言过其实(微笑不是万能的)。 重难点突破 1.写亲身经历时可以选哪些场景？如何切入？ A.社交场合———结识新朋友、参加社交活动等(微笑代表友好、开放， 能缓解尴尬、紧张情绪等，给对方留下好的印象)； B.人际关系———与家人或朋友产生矛盾冲突、心情低落时(微笑代表宽 容、理解等，起到减少矛盾冲突，缓解人际冲突等作用) C.身处逆境、遭遇挫折时———比赛或考试失利等；(微笑代表了安慰、 鼓励，告诉我们要坚强勇敢面对困难、挫折，对未来充满希望等) D.成长或成功时———通过努力成绩取得进步或认真准备比赛取得成功 (微笑代表了认可、喜悦、自豪、充满信心等) E.自己失意却帮助他人被感谢时等(微笑代表了喜悦、感激之情，能帮 助我们改善心情、振作精神) A possible version There are times when a small action can make a big difference. Smile is just one of them and my recent experience has deepened my understanding of its magical power. The Power of Smile There are times when a gesture as simple as a smile can do wonders, lighting up someone in the darkness and even healing the soul. Overwhelmed by the stress from my poor academic performance, I was on the verge of breaking down. Noticing my frustration, Shelly, my best friend came to offer a few words of comfort but I was in such low spirits that I blurted out some sharp words and she ran away weeping. Regrettably, I was too ashamed to apologize and I couldn't feel worse, which threw me into a world of darkness. The moment I saw her approaching the next day, I lowered my head immediately, trying to shun her/avoid her deliberately. However, she stopped me and gave me a hug. When I looked up, I met a smiling face, as sweet as flowers in the spring /as gentle as a summer breeze. At that moment, all my anxiety and depression melted away. When words fail, smile speaks. Useful expressions 1.boost one's mood/cheer sb. up 2.establish/forge a close relationship/rapport/ties with sb. 与某人建立亲 密的关系 (①connect with sb./bond with sb. ②build/create/forge a special bond with sb. ) 3.strengthen the bond between… and… 4.reduce feelings of anxiety and depression 减少焦虑和抑郁 5.make/leave a good first impression on sb. 6.overcome/get over embarrassment/awkwardness 消除尴尬、局促不安 7.relieve/ease tension and stress 缓解紧张和压力 8.take/draw comfort from one's words 从某人的话中得到安慰 9.offer a few words of comfort 说上几句安慰的话语 e into conflic ... ...
