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课件网) 读后续写系列微技能 二 如何让对话描写更加传神 (1)“I would love to,” said Emily. (2)“I didn’t mean to hurt you,” she said. (3)“I...I.. don’t think I’m suitable for the character,”I said. (4)“I will never do that again,” I said. (5)“I don’t know,” said Zeb. (6)“And I also take delight in working the land,”said the farmer. (7)“I want that one,”the boy said. (8)The little girl said, “Sorry.” 对话标签在前面时，不能倒装；对话标签在后面时，如果主语是名词，则可以倒装。而代词不可以倒装。 换个词呗 (一) 换个词-- 不能只是said 如何让对话描写更加传神？ 1. “Why don’t you want to accept this wonderful opportunity ” _____ the boss on the phone. 2. “Shall we leave now ” he _____ to us and we left the room very quietly. 3. “Help! Help! I can’t swim,” _____ the frightened boy. 4. “Please don’t hurt my cat,” _____Sarah as her brother picked it up by one leg. asked whispered screamed begged scream whisper beg ask (一) 换个词-- 不能只是said 5. “Yes, I bought a car and a new flat this winter,” _____ my father. 6. “Are you coming with us ” _____ Li Ming to his friend on the other side of the room. 7. “I didn’t like that meal at all,” _____the customer. 8. “Perhaps you would like to go this way ” _____the man shyly. answered shouted complained suggested answer shout complain suggest (一) 换个词-- 不能只是said (1)“I would love to,” said Emily. (2)“I didn’t mean to hurt you,” she said. (3)“I...I.. don’t think I’m suitable for the character,”I said. (4)“I will never do that again,” I said. (5)“I don’t know,” said Zeb. (6)“And I also take delight in working the land,”said the farmer. (7)“I want that one,”the boy said. (8)The little girl said , “Sorry.” answered explained. replied. promised. added insisted. sobbed 请选用适当的动词替换said (一) 换个词-- 不能只是said 1. 说 _____2. 小声说 _____ 3. 解释 _____4. 请求 _____5. 大喊 _____6. 建议 _____ 7. 尖叫 _____8. 补充说 _____9. 宣布 _____ 10. 同意 _____11. 承认 _____12. 重复说 _____13. 继续说 _____14. 叹息说 _____15. 责备 _____16. 认为 _____17. 嘟囔 _____18. 结巴地说 _____ say, utter whisper, murmur explain ask, beg, request, demand yell, shout, cry advise, suggest, propose scream add announce, declare admit, acknowledge agree repeat continue sigh scold, blame think, believe, argue mumble stammer 各种各样的“说” (一) 换个词-- 不能只是said (二) 给各种“说”加点料 如何让对话描写更加传神？ 加点料呗 (1)“I will never do that again,” I promised firmly. (2)“I would love to,” answered Emily in a pleasant tone. (3)“I didn’t mean to,” she explained in a low voice. (4)“I...I.. don’t think I’m suitable for the character,”I replied with embarrassment. (5)“I want that one,”the boy insisted, pointing to the little dog. (6) With tears in her eyes, the little girl sobbed, “Sorry.” (二) 给各种“说”加点料：6大技巧 (1)“I would love to,” answered Emily (2)“I didn’t mean to,” she explained (3)“I...I.. don’t ... ...
