(
课件网) 2024届T8联考高三第二次学业质量评价 (2024届高三第二次学业质量评价(T8联考))假定你是李华，毕业在即， 你校英文报举办了以“An Unforgettable Activity in High School”为主 题的征文活动。请你写一篇英文短文投稿，分享一次你参加过的校园 活动。内容包括：1.活动内容。 2.活动感受。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 An Unforgettable Activity in High School 写作注意要点 1.基本时态为一般过去时。 2.写作思路：三段论。第一段简要引出自己难忘的一个高中活动；第二 段介绍活动的具体内容(要点1)；第三段活动感受(要点2)。 参考答案： An Unforgettable Activity in High School My high school has witnessed many colorful activities in the past 3 years, among which the coming-of-age ceremony is especially unforgettable. Present at the ceremony were all we students from Grade 3， along with our parents and teachers. It kicked off with an inspiring speech delivered by our president, which conveyed congratulations and anticipations about our future. Then came a series of activities, ranging from expressing gratitude to our parents and teachers to making a promise of being responsible for the adulthood. The highlight was when we walked through the coming-of-age gate. The ceremony will be rooted in my mind as a reminder that I should shoulder my responsibility as an adult. 下水作文1 An Unforgettable Activity in High School As high school students about to graduate,we have exposed ourselves to many brilliant and interesting activities, of which the most memorable one for me is the coming-of-age ceremony. Present at the ceremony were all the senior three students as well as our teachers and parents. The big event began with the address delivered by our principal, followed by wishes from representatives of parents and teachers. Then came the adult oath from all students under the leadership of the president of the Student Union. The ceremony ended up with the students' passing the adult gate, and giving a high five to their school leaders. The ceremony will be an experience I will never forget.(113 words) 中文翻译 大家下午好！我们的外教Lucy老师返回美国。今天，我们在这里为她 举行欢送会。 一次难忘的高中活动 作为即将毕业的高中生，我们都经历了很多精彩且有趣的活动。于我 而言，最难忘的活动当属成人礼。 我们全体高三同学、老师和家长参加了成人礼。首先校长致辞。紧接 着是家长代表和教师代表送上的祝福。全体同学在学生会主席的带领 下进行了成人宣誓。最后同学们通过成人门，和迎接他们的学校领导 一一击掌。 此次成人礼将是我终身难忘的一次经历。 下水作文解析 1.应用文写作前三步骤： (1)审题判定文体为投稿； (2)因文体是投稿，故李华身份在正文中不必交代； (3)因文本主体部分为介绍自己最难忘的一个高中活动并介绍活动内容， 故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。 2.本文的亮点： (1)expose oneself to使某人接触某事； (2)Present at the ceremony were …表语形容词置于句首产生完全倒装 结构； (3)the big event重要的活动； (4)followed by紧接着，分词短语作状语； (5)Then came …运用完全倒装结构； (6)end up with以…告终； (7)give a high five to sb和 ... ...
