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课件网) 读后续写之动作描写微技能 授课教师： ● 0 高考以胜 一为梦想而奋斗为理想而坚定一 WISH YOU FOREVER YOUNG.FOREVER HOT TEARS 梦想」去拼博 YYYA ×Xx Thinking 1.What's the most difficult part of continuation writing 2.How to describe an action vividly / 1.每日素材积累 look vi..看 see vt.看见 watch v.观看 observe y.观察 notice v.注意到 spot v.认出，发现 必备单词 stare vi..凝视，盯 witness vt..目击 看 sweep y.扫视 overlook vt.俯瞰 sight v.看见 spyt.看到，注意到 glare vi.怒目而视 glance vi..扫视；匆匆一看 peer vi.盯看，凝视 gaze vi.注视，凝视 scan vt.细看；端详 walk :.走 run y.跑 step ,i.迈步；行走 pace.踱步（于） 必 wander v.闲逛 approach y.走近 snake vi.蜿蜒行进 march vi.齐步走 单 走 rush vi.冲，奔 hurry vi..赶快 词 race v.快速移动 move y.移动，走 stumble vi.蹒锄而行 dash vi.猛冲 jump v.跳 spring vi.跳；跃 跳 必备单词 leap y.跳 skip vi.蹦蹦跳跳地走 hold y.抓住 catch_v.抓住 抓 grab y.抓住 grasp v.抓紧，抓牢 snatch.夺走，抢走 N 2.掌握动作描写的微技能 Skill 1:Choose Accurate Verbs 用精准动词代替笼统动词 2/ general words(笼统词) concrete words(具体词) walk tiptoe (蹑手蹑脚地走) run dash/rush (猛冲) look glance(瞥见) glare (凝视) say/talk chat (闲聊) whisper(耳语) cry weep/sob(啜泣) eat bite(咬)cheW咀嚼)swallow(吞下) 感知：结合语境，如何优化表达？ 1.Because of his lies,she looked at him Because of his lies,she glared at him. 2 With only twenty seconds left,I ran to the line. With only twenty seconds left,I rush/dashed to the line. 3.With only two minutes left,he ate his meal. With only two minutes left.He swallowed up his meal 4.She heard her mother say quietly as she walked down the hall,"Don't wake your dad up." She heard her mother whispered as she tiptoed down the hall,"Don't wake your dad up.
