(
课件网) 2021年新高考Ⅰ卷 读后续写分析 Made by Erin 试卷续写材料呈现 The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. Para 1. 试卷续写材料呈现 The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Para 2. 试卷续写材料呈现 Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 试卷续写材料呈现 Para 3. 试卷续写要求 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. _____ The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. _____ 词汇积累 everything was going smoothly 一切都很顺利 panicked adj. 感动恐慌的、惊慌失措的 catch the smell of 闻到……的味道 文章大意 文章主要讲述了Jenna and Jeff双胞胎俩人为他们的妈妈 准备母亲节早餐的过程。虽然准备的过程手忙脚乱 ，但是却充满了孩子与父母之间深深地爱。该故事围绕“孩子对父母的爱和感恩以及兄弟姊妹互帮互助”这一主题展开。 文本分析 梳理原文 梳理原文（记叙文五要素） Jenna and Jeff, the father and mother Mother's Day The kitchen excited → confident, careful, calm → frightened, panicked, powerless → disappointed, depressed Jenna and Jeff tried their best to prepare breakfast for their mother. Who When Where How (emotion) What (main idea) 读五要素 2. 情感 + 情节分析 Para 1. 情节 情感 Jenna and Jeff思考着如何给妈妈准备母亲节早餐。 内心充满期待的、无比激动的、兴致勃勃的。 Para 2. 情节 情感 Jenna and Jeff准备早餐的过程，精心地煎着面包片。 自信的、小心翼翼的、谨慎地、仔细地、开心的、期待的、镇定的。 Para 3. 情节 情感 厨房弄得一团糟，Jenna and J ... ...
